Re: Let's Write a Sawng (Step 7. Lyrics.)

Hey Rivers! Here is my shot at lyrics - FRENCHIE THE FRY.

LYRICS

verse 1 -
i see you everytime i glare
no clue what to do
inside my mind it's bare
disipline confines the right
and i don't know
seems so black and white

verse 2 -
sleeping in and dreams at night,
in this single bed -
i think i'm just strung tight
i'll drive and wait to meet you there
when the sun sets

chorus -
happens everywhere
the rythym's in the air
my 80's radio
tells me it ain't so

verse 3 -
we'll listen to the air in flight
frequencies and stars, i know among twilight
the song will calm the minds affair
and i'll float through
the moons in line of sight

verse 4 -
just thought i'd tell you that i care
waves pass over trees
can feel it in your hair
trainspotting while we -
watch the flights
and now we go

chorus -
happens everywhere
the rythym's in the air
my 80's radio
tells me it ain't so

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[frenchiethefry]

I did this so fast I just realized I use "Don't know" twice in the first verse.

The first "Don't know" I would swap to "No clue" if I could do it over.

Also if in the chorus the "ain't so" part in the last line is too Weezer-cliche - it could be substituted with something like "Makes it (or me?) good to go" for example.

[jaythepaladin]

This is good i thought i was the only one who put verse verse chorus verse verse chorus!

[kazpereira]

frenchie - I liked your lyrics - they were pretty cool. the "seems so black and white" hook is so nice

[warren7722]

Really really like the last two verses.