sorry it took so long i am so busy i hope you understand. a-nat please go now! you'll get hurt! n-no i dont care about me at all i only care about you just come with me and i promise you everything will be better, all of this will go away im trying to help you. [all of a sudden allies dad slams the door so hard her door falls of] John-GET OUT OF MY HOUSE NOW[he runs toward nat and punches him and kick him till he falls to the floor coughing up blood] [allie screamed and cried so hard] a-DAD LEAVE HIM ALONE!!! PLEASE!! STOP!!!![she was crying so hard and she tried to grab nat and she put him on his bed very gently and kissed his forehead] John-ALLIE MOVE NOW!!!!! GO AWAY!!! GET OUT BEFORE I HURT HIM MORE! [but allie stayed on the bed with nat crying and trying to make him feel better] [then out of nowhere allies mom barged in] Laura-GO JOHN LEAVE AND NEVER COME BACK!!!!!!!!!! I HATE YOU!!!! LEAVE ALLIE ALONE! John-SHUTUP LAURA! Laura-NO GET OUT!!!! BEFORE I CALL THE COPS [john didnt budge and he smacked laura so hard her teeth came out] John-see if you just listen none of this would happen! [she was knocked out cold] Allie-MOM!!!!![she ran over to her] Laura-honey leave now go take a cab i called for one theyll be here in 5 minutes take nat to a hospital far away and go to a hotel and stay the night call me when u get there and there is money on the counter downstairs[she whispered] Allie-ok mom ill call the cops to come when i leave. Laura-ok now go ill distract him Allie-kay[so laura talked trash back to him her ran towards her and talked back and threatened her then allie had to hold him on his side they went downstairs grabbed the money and left] Driver-were to? Allie-new jersey please, can you take us to the closest hospital there? Driver-sure miss, umm.......is that why? a-yes can you please hurry [allie called the cops and told them everything] nat-alllllieee[he opened his eyes and saw her crying silently next to the window] allie
OMG!I LOVED IT!
natalina2gether4eva 3 years ago
thanks ill upload by tonight!
natnallie2gtha4eva 3 years ago
AMAZING whens the next??!!
sweetirpie77456 3 years ago
ill try to make another one. im not promising.
natnallie2gtha4eva 3 years ago
Let me guess....Her mom dies saving her and she has to live with nat? That would be sad. My biggest fear is my mom dieing. It scares me SO much!! Especially because i know one day it will happen.
MDaugharty 3 years ago
i cant tell u but on the next one youll probably cry i cried when i wrote it.
natnallie2gtha4eva 3 years ago