a kigo is very important in haiku, but considering this is (apparently) a class assignment; the teacher, not the young poets, is the one 'at fault'. In the first haiku, it seems it is 5,8,5, but considering the'5,7,5' syllabic layout is only a westernisation of the traditional jaapanese system, using units of hiragana (ka, ki, ku, ke, ko etc.) they, again, cannot be deemed responsible. Nice idea, a good idea for a weekly or bimonthly exercise, class votes on a subject, then composes haiku...
a kigo is very important in haiku, but considering this is (apparently) a class assignment; the teacher, not the young poets, is the one 'at fault'. In the first haiku, it seems it is 5,8,5, but considering the'5,7,5' syllabic layout is only a westernisation of the traditional jaapanese system, using units of hiragana (ka, ki, ku, ke, ko etc.) they, again, cannot be deemed responsible. Nice idea, a good idea for a weekly or bimonthly exercise, class votes on a subject, then composes haiku...
MatsuoBashoThePoet 3 years ago
Hi salt lake city from thecougarshow we are gonna put ur 1:32 sec Haiku to air this Sunday on 88 point 5 FM radio munt wellington 00:15 hrs nz time
Very kewl
thecougarshow 3 years ago
Yah for Libbie! Yah for jello!
hedemill 3 years ago
Cool - next time, remember real Haiku require reference to the season - nice effort though - cute and fun.
cupwithhandles 4 years ago
*chuckles* Cute...for real. I don't do that, but I love making Haiku poems.
Kaithehedgehog12321 4 years ago
COOL
1987lobo 4 years ago