NEW SONG DEMO This is the update version, we almost done with it, please rate it and give us some feedback, we need to know if you like it or not and please tell us what do we need to change, thank you
this song is really good. It is based on reality i would say. the only part i dislike is the "phaj es" part. Im a girl and i want to dedicate this song to someone but i can't be a phaj es for a guy. But the rest is good so far..keep it up. ;)
I also think that you he is putting too much expression into part of the song. (Like putting too much exaggeration when trying to sing "Tsis txhob mauj qhov ncaim"). Also the song is like boring for me because its too slow? But that my opinion.
On the other side, OMG!! This song reminds me how I use to like one of my friend. This song is what I told myself when I use to like her. =( Brings back a lot of memories. Thanks theloswing. =)
But I think the song needs working (I think). I'll tell you want I like/don't like.
When he(i believe its wave singing) "ua phooj ywg, nyiam koj rau kuv siab". It makes me scratch my head, what is he trying to say? Maybe add the "es" between that? I know the song is about a guy liking one of his friend, and wishing to become more than "friend" but I think that the wrong choice of words for this part. Also don't pause at "Es tus kuv niaj hnub nrog".
The piano sound so beautiful and i love the lyric. It does make me think of that person. I can't wait to see the done version and can't wait to have a copy of my own. Great job Loswing!
I think it should have violins playing to make it a little more dramatic. besides i like it but the lyrics....its okay. I think it should have more deeper meaning. But so far its good. The singing is a little too over, like too express but keep it up:)
Nice job!!!! But phaj ej is not Hmong word. So I would say nraug txuj. ( nraug txuj hauv koj siab)
Puaspaubzoo 2 weeks ago
this song is really good. It is based on reality i would say. the only part i dislike is the "phaj es" part. Im a girl and i want to dedicate this song to someone but i can't be a phaj es for a guy. But the rest is good so far..keep it up. ;)
sexymist1 3 weeks ago
love it!!!!
panhiayang92 3 weeks ago
I also think that you he is putting too much expression into part of the song. (Like putting too much exaggeration when trying to sing "Tsis txhob mauj qhov ncaim"). Also the song is like boring for me because its too slow? But that my opinion.
On the other side, OMG!! This song reminds me how I use to like one of my friend. This song is what I told myself when I use to like her. =( Brings back a lot of memories. Thanks theloswing. =)
DarkAce599 3 weeks ago in playlist Uploaded videos 2
First of all I love the song!!
But I think the song needs working (I think). I'll tell you want I like/don't like.
When he(i believe its wave singing) "ua phooj ywg, nyiam koj rau kuv siab". It makes me scratch my head, what is he trying to say? Maybe add the "es" between that? I know the song is about a guy liking one of his friend, and wishing to become more than "friend" but I think that the wrong choice of words for this part. Also don't pause at "Es tus kuv niaj hnub nrog".
DarkAce599 3 weeks ago in playlist Uploaded videos 2
The piano sound so beautiful and i love the lyric. It does make me think of that person. I can't wait to see the done version and can't wait to have a copy of my own. Great job Loswing!
cloudyang92 4 weeks ago 2
I think it should have violins playing to make it a little more dramatic. besides i like it but the lyrics....its okay. I think it should have more deeper meaning. But so far its good. The singing is a little too over, like too express but keep it up:)
Rozenladie 4 weeks ago in playlist Uploaded videos
luving the song already. u should try having a girl sing backup!
hanakumo 1 month ago
i can play that, its super easy
eatmybighmongdick 1 month ago
is he really playing the beginning? i wanna see the whole thing
questionguy4 1 month ago