I woke up dreaming of you, my original "song"... alternative title: ♥♫

I've never played the piano, so this few playful chords are all I could come up with, so far :)... but at least they are original and sound fairly good, right?! :)
Now, the "lyrics" are much better... or maybe they just seem to be, because they are more then just that for me.
Although the person I've wrote this for liked it, or at least that's what she said :), unfortunately didn't feel the same way about me... so, after a while, this became just a reminder of all that.
And now, that I've added the refrain and this "great music", it might turn out to be a great song... someday.
That's the idea behind posting it here, so maybe someone will come up with some good music... before I do! :)
Enjoy... if possible.

PS I didn't use my "great voice"... to avoid a disaster.

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[ZaibatsuVoc]

I really enjoyed that. But you certainly need some editing with music - it's a bit sharp for my ear. Nevertheless, the lyrics were likable, although I still want to hear them, no matter how terrible you sing.

There is a sincerity in here. Maybe a bit working on some lines will do - but then again it's just an opinion of someone who never finished a single song.

[tubingfromtimetotime]

Thank you, I'm glad you've enjoyed it.

I appreciate your opinion, and I'll spend some time improving the audio

I'm sure that the "lyrics" can get better, but this is how they came out. If this will get to be a song, it will probably suffer some artistic changes :)

With all do respect :), you don't know what you're asking for: I'm not a singer, I don't want to be one, I shouldn't be one, so... everyone, including me, is better off without my "singing voice" here, although I get what you're saying

[ZaibatsuVoc]

Well, at least you can find someone to sing it. Many people have friends who have been taught at music school or something.

If you post another version of the song, I hope you would let me know about it. I really look forward to seeing it. Or - which is better - to listening to it.

[tubingfromtimetotime]

Ok, I'll do that... I also hope that you will tell me immediately if you know any of Shania Twain's closest friends, or (which is better) herself, thanks. :)

[ZaibatsuVoc]

Shania Twain? I thought she was country singer.