Curves

This is a submission for a New TV series looking for Canada's best Songwriters. Please take a listen and tell them what you think of my original song I wrote.‏

Category:

Music

Tags:

• Celeste
• Curves
• Songwriter
• Canada's Best Singer
• TV series
• New
• original song.

[lustiec]

@SongstressKD Thanks Kirsten. I didn't realized this was you when I replied last time.

Thanks for your input I appreciate your feedback and the fact that you searched and listened to this song. *smile*

[SongstressKD]

I mean changing the chorus to with now words instead of rock your world. I think it fits better. just my opinnion you can take it or lekave it:)

[lustiec]

@SongstressKD I'm always open to feedback. I just don't fully understand what you're telling me. *smile*

Can you try and explain to me again the (WITH NO WORDS) part?

Thanks, Celeste

[SongstressKD]

I don't know if you want anyones feedback. But I'm a singer songwriter too and I had an idea for your chorus...

I'm gonna rock your world

with my curves,

I'm gonna show you what a girls made of (WITH NO WORDS)

I don't know if youll like it or not. It just to me didn't seem to fit quite right with the tempo. Dunno just my opinnion. Great song keep the singing and writing up!