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Uploaded by on Feb 24, 2008

My second film!

Its full of amateur mistakes, but I'm proud of it. Any critics are welcome, I just want to learn.

Thank you again to my wonderful actors, you guys put up with a lot.

The best comment I have received on this film so far:
"Hannah, you're a pain in the ass, but you're worth it."
-Mr. Clemens (my film teacher)

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  • Are you sure no bugs were harmed? That looked like a pretty convincing bug squashing to me!

  • Jivesh and I made sure the bug was still alive! He's kept the bug as a pet I think :P

  • Very funny satire! Loved the Fiske Guide and the allusion to a place starting with "Va" where the people like community service and partying...." (Or do I read too much into the text?) I look forward to the third film!

  • I'm glad you noticed all that. it was there! Hehe :)

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  • I love how you even credited Bob the bug...

  • Its good, especially the dialogue, it flows naturally, well written, my only advice would be to get the main actor guy to tone it down a bit, he's a little bit too jumpy and all "huh!" way too often, Overall GREAT JOB, this is really funny and well done - good idea!

  • the first shot of the sky makes me smile. it is so simple...yet so beautiful. great eye

  • "... in the... place". All in all pretty sweet, I liked the opening sequence a lot... with the happy go lucky music. the only thing that I didn't like was how many times you crossed the line in the conversation with Chelsea and George. Other than that... AWESOME!

  • First line: "You're late!" Good. hee This is really good! And great editing. And good wardrobe for Saint Peter. And snowflakes in Heaven from your first film? A theme started here? I'm waiting for the next film...

  • That was awesome.  Very original and extremely clever (I love satire). When George told me he lost some weight, I didn't expect to see him that lean...very nice, Jorge! Loved the cameo of Mr. Cahill as well lol

  • Seriously, this is a really creative film, the dialogue is sharp and the ideas are original. Excellent job.

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