Kim wants to go to the olympics but her coach says she should lose weight to be the best! But when she takes his advice her would crumbles.Link when Fic is upPower Rangers (c)SabanPerfect Body (c) LMN Courage (c) Superchick
Okay...I love the editing that you did with this. All the clips in this one are awesome, and I like the ones that you added from your first version.The narration, though, I was having a problem with. For the second title, with the "but your coach..." there is no need for an exclamation I think it takes away from the seriousness of the clip. And at the end, the "find out in" seemed kind of..not professional. I think you can come up with a creative way to say that. Still a good job!
Okay...I love the editing that you did with this. All the clips in this one are awesome, and I like the ones that you added from your first version.The narration, though, I was having a problem with. For the second title, with the "but your coach..." there is no need for an exclamation I think it takes away from the seriousness of the clip. And at the end, the "find out in" seemed kind of..not professional. I think you can come up with a creative way to say that. Still a good job!
HopelessRomantic45 3 years ago