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hey girl with your fancy dress
just who are you trying to impress
whats it like to get up everyday
just to make sure your makes-up's all in place
gee its must be a big heavy load
since the whole world cares about your fancy clothes
the young girls who want to be you
think they're gonna live the way you live
so be loud now, but be proud now
make your choices like we gotta live with them, even if you don't.
that front door don't work both ways
do you know what's inside that place
life is more than one big dance
and sometimes my dear, we get, no second chances
hey girl with your platinum key
what do you want history to say
you got everything right on your plate
despite all you could do, you choose to play it away
youre not the only one out on the road
surely you can afford someone to drive your Rolls
There are young girls who want to be you
Think they're gonna live the way you live
So be loud now, but be proud now
Make your choice like you've got to live with it, even if you dont
The front door don't work both ways
When you know whats inside the place
Life is more than one big dance
and sometimes my dear we get no second chances
rough draft original
Love the passion in your singing.
Frank
56stargazer 1 year ago
Hi Rachael, I love watching how this song grows. Your voice suits its message perfectly. Good to see your smiling personality come through at the very end of the video. Thanks for sharing yourself.
I hope you are having a wonderful holiday time. Be well!
DoRayMeFa 2 years ago
Love the soulfulness (is that a word?) of this ... great vocals..
mel.
encinitasmel 2 years ago
Very cool Rachel.
TubularBelle 2 years ago
Right on Rachael.
5 *
Robin :o)
RobinStrower 2 years ago
Awesome song and performance for a rough draft!
Johnfern99 2 years ago
Beautiful!!!!
lovelyvoices0 2 years ago
very beautiful singing voice rachael. very beautiful, keep it up.
crazywilliamriveley 2 years ago
Wow!!! lisa lavie commented on this yu kno that your really lucky lol
Lynz2Gerard 2 years ago
:-) Lovely
lisalavie1 2 years ago