Redemption - Original composition

I'm a little nervous about uploading this cause it's the first composition im uploading with lyrics in it! ^^; but i got to nervous to use my own voice for it, so i'm uploading the instrumental of it instead. my voice isnt suited to this kind of song.

Which brings me to my next point~ if someone want's to volenteer their voice for this song, please let me know ^_^

Anyway... this song is to people i am sorry to, and who i have taken for granted and so on. some of the lyrics, i wouldnt expect anyone to get because they are just between me and these people. but i suppose this is also just a general sorry to anyone.

Music (c) Isabella H
Lyrics (c) Isabella H
Pictures (c) Isabella H

(I did draw the pictures. And yes, i did steal the 'Metal Jaw' thing from raiden xD but other wise, my own picture.)

Lyrics:
All those time I've lied,
Oh, I'm so sorry.
For the times you've cried.
I wake to find your shadow fade into dust,
Melting into the morning.
I wake as from my dream.

By my weakness, by my regret,
I swear that I can change for the better, my love.

I can only swear to keep the promise I've made, that I've made,
For however long I could keep up my charade, my charade.

This will be the last exception I make.
I will walk on to a new tomorrow.
And if the sky should fall,
Please know that I will be there for you through it all.

Every day and every night, I wonder;
I lie awake and think about the future.

"Why would you want another punishment, Oh why?"
Now I will ask myself next time I lie, I lie.

I am not exempt,
So, I'm so sorry.
I should not have left you all alone.
My words have been forced and strained,
No longer can I speak,
For I sing these words unfeigned.

For every lifeless moment spent,
We carry on our lives, content.
Even so, I dream to say goodbye,
For fear I go unheard inside.

If you believe,
If you believe me,
If you believe,
If you'll believe me.

We are not immune,
There is no cure but,
I depend on you.

You were not the kind,
To say you're sorry,
But the fault is mine,
Sometimes I lie awake, I feel so alone.
Do you feel like this, or am I own my own?

All those time I've lied,
Oh, I'm so sorry.
For the times you've cried.
I wake to find your shadow fade into dust,
Melting into the morning.
I wake as from my dream.


DO NOT TAKE OR USE THIS WITHOUT PERMISSION. OR I WILL NOT ONLY BE PISSED AND ANGRY, BUT I'LL WRITE YOU A LETTER TELLING YOU HOW ANGRY I AM!!!
^^

Category:

Music

Tags:

• Redemption
• Sorry
• Song
• original
• composition
• piece

[wan2bepro]

OMG you wrote this whole song by yourself? if so, you're a genious :O i'll let some real musicians hear this song for ya, keep up the good work

[RinoaShadow]

@wan2bepro yes ^^ as i always write my songs~ :) thank you! i appreciate that so much!! ^_^

[mewwinxsailormelody]

I wanna try singing it~ it's so pretty~

JUST.....WHERE DO THE LYRICS FIT IN THE SONG?? x)

It's really pretty and fantastic and....you so amazing with the composing and shizz~ :D

[LainaLain]

I really like the flute. It brings all the sweetness and nostalgia to the song. My favorite part is 3:34 because of the piano in the background. I think the lyrics are really original. I'm glad you don't worry about if ppl get the lyrics or not because it takes away the originality when you do. All in all, I think this has become one of my fav songs by you.

[SabrinaValenzuela]

Beautiful and moving composition! great job hun! ^__^

[Arrow9100kj]

yaaaay! Now I can stop calling you Rin xD! This is such a moving composition Isabella and the lyrics are very touching. I really hope you get a vocalist!!