Victim Episode 1: Tell Me When It's Over

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Authors Note: This story is complete fiction. The characters are not famous in this story and are average people. There ages have been changed. Yet there still Nick, Kevin, and Joe! Enjoy!

Kevin- 19 He is staying at home for a year before going back to school to help with his younger brothers while there fathers new business gets it's start.

Joe- 16
Is a junior in high school.
Nick- 14
Nick is a freshman in High school.
Codie-16
Codie is also a junior. She is good friends with all three boys.

Preface:
Nicks POV

Is this what death looks like? I never really thought about death, until now. It runs in my mind over and over again. Images haunt my mind, how will I die, will they find my body, what will my family think? I could blame myself for not telling my parents what happened that night, but would that have changed anything? It wouldn't save Josh and it still wouldn't save me. If I had answered their stupid question, Are you alright? maybe things would be better, at least for me. I just hated how the question reminded me that something was wrong. How something happened that would never go away, and would haunt me until the day I took my last breath, until I reached eternity. It's to late for what ifs because I know eventually I'm dead, and no one will know that I was killed by my dads best friend.

Untitled chapter 1 :
Tell me when it's over

Nicks POV
It always starts the same way, I'm leaving the library. I know what happens when I reach the end of the street but my legs wont stop walking. I look up and down the street, nothing. Most places are closed and most people are at their homes with there families for dinner. I'm at the stop sign and that's it, the moment that changed my life, forever. A hand covered my mouth. The hand smelt like stale cigarettes and dirt. I try to scream but nothing comes out and just like that in black and white, I'm raped. It's like I'm standing there watching this person hurting me. Dragging me to his car, tearing at my cloths, scratching me, biting me, hitting me, and then raping me.

Normal POV
Nick wakes in cold sweat. He glances around the room and then reminds himself it was a dream. He's safe. Nick reaches over and turns on his bedside light. He couldn't sleep. He got up and walked over to the window, and watched. What if the stranger knew where he lived? What if he broke in and hurt his mom, his brothers, his dad, him? Nick got chills just remembering the man whispering into his ear.

???: Don't tell anyone

There was a light tap on the door and Joe walked into the room.

Joe: Hey, why are you up?

Nick: why are you up?

Joe: I couldn't sleep. I was worried about you, you've been acting different lately. What's up?

Nick looked away from the window and walked to his bed. He didn’t know what to say. How do you tell your big brother, or anyone about something like that? Joe walked into the room and sat down on the bed. Nick took a deep breath, maybe if he told Joe he would feel a little better, a little safer. Maybe if he wasn't alone, it would be easier to move on.

Nick: remember last week when I was late getting home from the library?

Joe: yea. Mom was mad because you missed dinner.

Nick: well I lied. I didn't go to Codies before I came home and lose track of time like I said. *Tears began to fill his eyes*

Joe: well what did you do?

Joe began to worry. What was his younger brother keeping from him? Nick stood up and turned around his back toward Joe. Joe wasn’t sure why but he didn't move. Nick pulled his shirt up and Joe gasped.

Joes POV
I couldn't believe my eyes. Nick had scratch marks all down his back and a large bite mark just below his shoulder. I stood up. I wanted to touch it and make it go away, but I couldn't.

Joe: what happened to you! Was it a fight? Who did that? *He stood walking to Nick*

Nick slid his shirt back down and turned. Joe could see the tears streaming down his little brothers face.

Nick: I don't know

Nick began to sob. Joe pulled his little brother close to him, and held him close.

Nick: I was on my way home and someone grabbed me. I didn’t know what to do, he took me to his car and he was yelling at me and

Joe: It's ok

Nick pulled away

Nick: No. let me finish! He raped me Joe, he raped me.

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Uploader Comments (babimunster23)

  • omg poor Nick, im soooo glad i found this story, gonna go read the next chapter =D

  • @xxxmonkeyful Thanks! I'm glad you found it too.lol.

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  • awww poor nick!!

  • lol ur welcome =]

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