Can't have you ( a Jonas love story) - Chapter 11

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Uploaded by on Feb 5, 2009

chapter 11 :)
Delia's P.O.V:
I got so tired from all that tickling and soon gave up and lied down on the grass again. Joe sat up and looked at me for a while, his eyes were those of a child's at Christmas when he opens his present and finds exactly what he's asked for. I wanted to say smth, but nothing came. He noticed that, and bent down over me. First our foreheads touched, then our noses, then he looked into my eyes with a little uncertainty,so i smiled and he saw that it was alright. He kissed me, my toes curled and my heart stopped for a few seconds, then i put my arms around his neck. He didn't pull away immediately after that kiss, he stayed a while over me, our faces nearly touching and his eyes just looking into mine.
I don't know how long we stayed in that garden, but i wish it never had to end. When we DID go inside, I showed him around the house, that he still refused to call "house", and instead, referred to it as "castle". I showed him his room that was connected to another 2 bedrooms where he and Kevin and Nick would sleep. Then I showed him where his parents would be staying and after that I told him that Frankie was going to get the best room in the house. It had its own bathroom, a king size bed and a balcony with a beautiful view of the city.
- Wow, he'll love you., said Joe.
- I hope they all will love me., i said in a shy voice.
- Of course they will, c'mere.
He took my hand and led me out on the balcony where he twirled me around as if we were dancing and then held me close to his chest and kissed me. Everything was perfect.
We played hide and seek and I won every single time cuz Joe kept on getting lost, and then we eat some lasagne and Joe still couldn't believe that I had a chef to cook for me. But around 10:00 PM he got used to the servants and the big unnecessary rooms and we went in one of the living rooms to watch a movie. It was "Seven Pounds" and I cried at the end. Joe put his arms around me, holding me tight and kissed me on the cheek where my tears were. I felt so safe and loved like all the waiting was worth that moment.

Joe's P.O.V:
The movie was amazing, (A.N: it really is) I was so glad that me and Delia shared the same tastes and I was so surprised that she cried, she never told me she cried at movies like that (A.N: yeah, i did cry). When i kissed her wet cheeks, they weren't a bit salty, but rather sweet, I know that sounds cheezy coming from a guy, but it was like I was living a dream, a fairy tale. Then we went upstairs and she showed me her room, which was just like Frankie's, only more girly-ish. We lied down on the bed and talked about our plans for the week.
- What about after? she asked all of a sudden.
- After what? I asked.
- After this week, you'll be leaving and we won't see each other anymore.
- Sure we will, I'll come back, I said, stroking her hair.
- But still, our lives are gonna change. We're both public figures and word will get out and ----
- Hey, chill, don't worry about that just now.
- Which reminds me, how come there were no screaming girls running after your cab?
- Heehee, no one knows me and my family are here. Everyone thinks we're still in LA.
- But you said you have an interview and a small performance on Friday.
- Yeah, but that's 2 days away, theoretically we're arriving tomorrow, i said as i rolled on top of her. - Right now, you and me, we're completely invisible to the world.., and I kissed her.
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(A.N) ok...so i love this chapter so much...maybe becuz 80%of it is from my own personal experience (heehee) and i truly believe that a garden is the perfect place for a first kiss...i love going into my garden and thinking about a certain boy who kissed me for the first time there, when everyone in the house was fast asleep...it truly was as if we were invisible... gosh i dunno why i felt the need to write this down...:))..i just did. :)

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  • can I just say - Yeah, but that's 2 days away, theoretically we're arriving tomorrow, i said as i rolled on top of her. - Right now, you and me, we're completely invisible to the world.., and I kissed her.

    - that part was really romantic :)

    Awesome chapter :D

  • thanks...

    i love to see new readers..cuz i get to come back to the first chapters and read them again to see what was so nice about them.... i forgot about that part....yeah...very romantic..and i'm glad you liked it :)

  • i really do like your stories, its just that, i think its weird for them to kiss and tickle each other and act like that if they are just meeting each other in person for the first time. just saying. other than that, great chapter! (: ♥♥♥♥

  • sorry if it seems out of place to you...but i don't see my characters as little kids...i know it's unlikely for the real joe jonas to be acting this way...but this is the type of relationship that i am familiar with,that i consider normal. I dont see anything weird in kissing and tickling a guy you feel you like and that likes you back.Don't worry...they're still good kids ;) they won't have sex or anything,but i think they're mature enough to show some affection, without losing their innocence

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