handshaped questions - original song

i just finished this song last week.. it´s for an old friend of mine..

lyrics:

I still remember the shape of your hand
and how it felt in mine
I still see us dancing in this crowded bar in spain
We walked the line of what to show and what to hide.

* I shared beds and thoughts and hopes and skin with you
And our voices formed a thread with our words to hold against the silence

I´m not sure what I did that pushed you away from me.
I can just guess and all my guesses weave a net
that holds me back from asking real questions
cause I haven´t asked, no, I haven´t asked you yet.

* worlds drifted apart and I wasn´t brave enough to cross .. the gap
instead I just tried to rewind the tapes you made, rewind the past.

Now life and sense have stepped between us.
You gave birth and I´m still waiting to be born.
I miss all your stories, all your words that swept around me
But did you ask, did you really ask enough?

* I´m still waiting to find myself complete. Did you?
And I don´t know where this questioning song is gonna lead me to

I still remember the shape of your hand
And how well it fit into mine.

Category:

Music

Tags:

• kayenne
• original

[haveyouseenher]

Beautifully told story.

I particularly like the lines

"We walked the line of what to show and what to hide"

and

"I can just guess and all my guesses weave a net

that holds me back from asking real questions"

[whitElephant238]

"you gave birth and i'm still waiting to be born" wow. incredible line. i love it!

[NickEvansMusic]

Someone was blinded by their tears and accidentally hit the dislike button.

[ulfern90]

Good:)

[MaxRothGroup]

Junge Lady, nach den ersten Tönen des Songs hatte ich bereits Tränen in den Augen, noch vor Ende der erste Strophe floß die erste Träne mein Gesicht herunter, bei 01:20 Minuten habe ich mich nicht geschämt wie ein Kind zu weinen und meinen Schmerz zuzulassen. - Du hast mit diesem Song das Ziel erreicht, wenn es das sein sollte - die Saiten in den Seelen derer zum Mitschwingen zu bringen, die (wie auch Du wohl) wissen - was eine Trennung "without a real reason" ist. - Danke.

[phone7x7]

beautiful

[ramon2006b]

Really good!

[ramazurdzsembori]

girl, i love your lines

and this mood fits this room so well now.

thanks

[songsformatthew]

Each time I listen to this I love it more and more...

[JohnProsserVideo]

still wonderful. You're very talented.

[nearsilence]

Dreaming during 3:27 minutes. thanks!