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Come to Think of It (orginal)

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Uploaded by on Jun 9, 2008

(Come to Think of It ©2008) LYRICS HERE

so here it is, my first original song...ever. always wanted to make my own music, figured was time to give it a go. would greatly appreciate feedback, comments, ratings....oh, but the recording quality is per my standard. I am working with a digital camera, not really intended for this. it changes my voice a bit, or at least i feel like it does. it is what it is. I hope you enjoy anyway.

In the shadow of the shade
I drink my life like lemonade
I sign the backside of a postcard
address it to you from my backyard
and if flat-broke was a body I'd be in it
and if this hadn't already started I'd begin it

Beneath the branches of the trees
I breathe a sigh of the fallen leaves
I search my mind for an unsaid phrase
and find behind my teeth hides the sun's rays
Oh and if emptiness was a body I'd be in it
and since won't ever be written I can sing it

Its ok if the rain comes
and I don't quite care if the ink runs
its ok if the clouds stay
I wasn't sending this postcard anyway

Between this paper and this pen
sets a day that never ends
empty lines to fill my daybreak
a stamp that binds to the landscape

and it don't matter if the rains come
and I don't quite care if the ink runs
it's ok if the clouds stay
I wasn't sending it anyway.

®Five Dollar Guitar

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  • I really like your lyrics.

  • thank you so much for listening!

  • I really like your lyrics.  Love the song!

  • thank you! i am glad you like it!!

  • i freakin loved this!!!

  • i owe you big for the share. i think i got a couple of new subscribers because of you!!

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  • I really love the way you master your lyrics with such pictorial and metaphorical terms in such a poignant way and matter of fact style. Thanks for sharing. I hope we can do something in the way of recording together.. Elton

  • Wow. Your lyrics are stunning.  Just excellent....

  • you are just awesome girl thanks for the comment!i write lyrics just cant play that guitar:(

  • Great stuff 5 bucks!

  • i love your style and delivery

    unique

  • That was just gorgeous,

    what a songbird u are !

    5 Awesome ******

  • My pleasure :)

  • Sweet lady of the flowering dress your words are the best i've heard since last i was a sober guest.

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