Stricken - A Song I Wrote

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Uploaded by on Sep 7, 2007

I wrote this a long time ago. I periodically change out the word "second" and "moment" in the chorus for no reason on accident so who knows which one it is.

=== Lyrics ===

Bitter strikes me as the person that I am. But I don't want to be. It's not me.

As this pans out it seems it's not even worth a damn. Tell me honestly, do you see, a hopeless faker whose smile seems so lonely?

(chorus)
Can you tell me why, I can't find a tear to cry. To cry. And I know this isn't how it's supposed to be. Give me a second/moment to clear out the debris.

All this hurt, from others blood I drew. I can't stand it, it doesn't fit. There's no reason for this to be my view. Where's the permit? Do you admit you see, a hopeless faker whose smile seems so lonely?

(chorus)

(bridge) All it is, is the pain inside that I try to cover that I try to hide. The formula will give you the sum, with each note I strum.

(chorus)

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Uploader Comments (bleed0range)

  • i like this song u rock! u sing really well too and play very nice to

  • why thank you, thank you very much. haha.

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  • wow, you should have a record deal or something man

  • good job.  you have a nice voice.

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  • Amazing, please keep up the good work, I wanna hear more.

  • lol you seem funny and your really talented this is a really good song and you really should have arecord deal no joke

  • definitly a great job dude! you really should have a record deal no joke

  • ahhh your so good! keep it up!

  • good damn good long before you were singing i had already singed your song it fitted perfectly to your version and mine youre damn good keep up the good work.

  • Pretty Good man! I wish I could play the guitar while singing. I suck doing both at once.

  • you play evan better than greenday

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