Meira Gothic Fusion Belly Dance
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Snaps for you girl getting up and dancing your lil' heart out!. A bit of constuctive criticism - a solo performance has got to have 'light' and 'shade', otherwise it just looks like you're dancing at the one pace, which to me this performance does... I can't see much differentiation between slow and fast. Don't get me wrong, I learned this way too! To me, 'Gothic Fusion' has to have that element of that slow, theatrical style of movement.
Good on ya gal for dancing from your heart! :-)
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Good job! Might I suggest a different fabric for the vail because that one didn't flow too well. Use something more like silk, or maybe chiffon. Chiffon will give you a nicer flowing fabric and it's still transparent if that's the look you're going for.
All Comments (52)
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i love it
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she did well! just remind her to loosen up! it helps with the nerves. much potential to grow on. diggin the background and the outfit.
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this is her first solo??? WOW< that energy was amazing! Very well done, lady!
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@Gnomosome Thanks for the constructive criticism. I learned something from it. I watched the dance and couldn't figure out what was the missing element. Now I understand. Plus, I also note that the moves require more use of the muscle as opposed to the just the body itself. That way the dance has more energy and will look alive. It does take guts to go up on stage and I do want to give my congrats to the dancer for taking the courage to go up there and giving it her all.
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i like the song, i think it's Godsmack??? maybe idk
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I loved your outfit! It's really lovely, and you didn't feel the need to expose every piece of skin you own. I could sense you were nervous, which is ok, being your 1st performance. It felt rushed though, slow down, and remember to enjoy it as well. I applaud your ability to keep going with the flow after a mistake. Very Important! Never rush off the stage, girl! Take in the crowd. They applaud for you!!! Keep practicing your art, I would love to see more of you in the future. ;)



appreciatin the constructive critique. :-)
jolynnemartinez 1 year ago
I found this totally spellbinding and captivating to watch. A natural energy, grace and confidence that comes out in this performance, if this is her first, solo gig, I so look forward to more from her!! Well done and thanx for sharing....
EmeraldGemstar09 1 year ago 2
@EmeraldGemstar09 > Shukran for your encouraging comments.
jolynnemartinez 1 year ago
Thank you, Gnomosome, for setting an excellent example of how to constructively critique a dance performance.
jolynnemartinez 2 years ago