As The World Burns S1E1: First Light (Halo Reach Machinima)
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nice
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@BillyandBarry If only this guy knew what is coming in the future.
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@SmallProductions1 Well the gauss hog water cannons are kinda necessary and realistic and the fires would be there if there was a crash.
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Very well done, I think you should tone down the voice actors and add in some more Cinematography. Overall I think its a great tie in to a new series...
-TheZeddProductions
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Oh my..yet another post apocalyptic machinima, there is so much "character progression " and originality i foresee in this, with dialogue that will blow our minds and effects that will make our heads assplode...this will be definitely above 2/10..yes indeed.
TrigramsProduction 1 month ago
@TrigramsProduction hi!
Thanks for the feedback, sorry if you didn't like this. i aim to make the rest of the series more original than the average post apocalyptic machinima, so if you have any tips that would be great.
BillyandBarry 1 month ago
Hmm, not bad. Cinematography could do with some improvement. So far, the story seems a bit generic (as in a bit common). The voicing is alright, maybe altering the audio levels a bit will make quieter voice actors a lot louder. The effects I thought were a bit pointless. Overall, I'd say well done, for a first attempt :)
SmallProductions1 1 month ago 2
@SmallProductions1 this isn't my first machinima, but thanks for the feedback anyway!
BillyandBarry 1 month ago
three words... Needs more views. This is very good, ima send it to a guy i know he pretty big and hopefully he can give you the big push on youtube that you deserve
MrKillercharm 1 month ago in playlist Uploaded videos
@MrKillercharm thanks dude!
BillyandBarry 1 month ago