Hey my name is Emma and im 15. I am popular, very fit, and normal height. I have brown hair and blue eyes with a light tan complextion(sp). My parents are rich and we live in the rich, rich part of hollywood with a huge mansion. Some celeberties live here but not alot. My mom is a lawyer and my dad is the owner of the BMW. It's the first day of summer vacation and I am having fun. Chris Brown lived right next door to me untill he moved. The house was up for sale but someone bought it. I dont know who is gonna live there. I layed on my float, in my pool and tanned in the sun.I had a nice cool lemonade in my hand. Thats when I heard my mom tell someone 'she is in the back'. Then another lady say 'go meet you new neighbor'. I took the shades off my eyes and looked up to see.........
Emma's POV
The Jonas brothers, I nearly fell of my float. I got out and walked out the pool since i was in the shallow end.
"Hey Im am Emma", I said
"Im nick", said Nick
"Im Joe", Joe said
"And Im Kevin", Kevin said
"You guys wanna hang out?", I asked
"Sure that would be great", they all said in unsion
"Ok guys lets go", I said leading them into the house.
"What do you wanna do", I asked
"A movie", said Joe
"Same here", said Nick and Kevin
I leaded them to the movie theater.
"You have a movie theater in your house", They all said
"Yeah, so what do you guys wanna watch?", I asked
"How about Norbit", said Kevin
"Ok guys I will be right back", I said
I went to go get the movie. I came back and out it in I sat down. This is how it went Kevin, Nick, Me, and then Joe. During the whole movie you just heard pure laughing. During the movie I thought about my birthday and how it was next week. I was having a huge party and mabye they wanted to come. So after the movie I told them.
"Hey guys", I said
"yeah", they all said
"You guys wanna come to my party next saturday?", I asked
"Yeah sure we would love too", they said
"Ok guys great", I said
We all went downstiars and went into the kitchen were our parents were.
Chapter 2 coming soon...
just a tip - overdescribing your character as "we live in the rich, rich part of hollywood" and "my parents are rich" do not really give the reader a good impression. Also, there is something called punctuation. :)
Nothing against the Jo Bros though, they are awesome.
skydancer95 3 years ago
i love them
smileyj22 3 years ago