should've listened to me nan (original song)

it's been a while, hope everyone's well out there....thanks for your comments good and bad they inspire me. peace to all!! http://www.myspace.com/ravens1001

lyrics 

she said to me...
that we were always ment to be,
the future and the history,
we'll travel the world and we'll be free,
and nobody will come between,
but time it did pass by.....
it was all a lie.

and then she told me.....
that god was always there for me,
hes love was more that i could see,
this pain i feel is just a test,
now give your heart it's for the best!
but time it did pass by.....
hope it's all a lie.

my country told me....
that they would always strive for peace,
but with the threat of war still arms increased,
and everything they say is true,
they'll never ever lie to you,
but time it did pass by....
it was all a lie!!

my nan once told me.....
the heart's a really precious thing,
don't give it up for anything,
shallow words can beat and bruise,
don't let them near don't you get used,
i asked her for the truth?
i now have the proof....

Category:

Music

Tags:

• original
• song
• acoustic
• alternative
• folk
• unsigned

[gherkamum]

great original track

very catchy

5*********

terry uk

[ravens1001]

Thanks again for taking the time to listen and comment, really appreciated :)

[Marseille5]

Man, there's really something happening. You certainly have a great talent. I discovered your channel thanks to your Barrett cover and, while listening to it, it was obvious that you are made for creating as you are excellent in creating atmospheres.

Keep on going, I'm subscribing, and hope you'll continue posting videos !

[ravens1001]

thanks so much, i'll definitely continue posting.....

have a good week ;)

[stevewestwood2007]

this is a beautiful song my friend...and i love the carraibian.reggae sound of the guitar....your not made for covers your made for originals...i hope the right ears are gonna find your sound!!11 they'll love it ...a big 5****s from me mate!!1

love peace and respect

[ravens1001]

Thanks Steve, I think that may be my fav comment ever, you put a smile on my face:)

Keep doing your thing, your great!

peace forever!

[ACadaver]

Yeah...I really like this. You should keep at it, catchy and emotional. Your NMH cover was okay but this original definitely shows what you're best at.

[stevewestwood2007]

your welcome ...my friend...like you!!1 say keep doin what your doin ..and someones gonna find ya!!1 kid...and i meant every word...you have a talent bursting to be released..

[ravens1001]

Thanks so much!

[RoZaGuitars]

Nice lyrics and lovely sound, we love it! *****