Lightsaber Duel - Elvár VS Lord Mal
Uploader Comments (dolekjole)
All Comments (200)
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sorry but the energy shield sux...
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In the beginning i thought this lord Mal to be dangerous, but he's simply gay (nothing aganinst the actor)
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u guys definetly put ur time in
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nerds
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this video is so awesome! i like almost wet my pants. can't believe i have not seen this one yet. good job!
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the effects were very well done. that's about all i can say, choreography looked really simple and Lord Mal looked emo, you could've done without the eye-shadow.
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Your shot variation can be a different. Maybe have some close ups of the saber, visual transitions or pan shots. (left to right or vice versa).
The beginning was great, I loved the whole idea with the mentor working with the student! To add a little more, maybe have the beginning of a Siths' life with your protagonist. All in all, well done!
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My advice for you is keep up the practice, take different ideas and make your choreography better. Sure, people are going to knock on your videos. I've practiced with swords for years, so, the best advice I can give, is practice. Again, great video, I would enjoy watching any other videos you make in the future to see how much better you get with practice. If you would like any suggestions for future use, simply message me here, I'd be more than happy to assist if you wish. Keep at it!!!
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Watching your video, and reading the other comments here, I have my own opinion. The story was interesting to say the least. I won't say its the worst, because I have seen far worse. The effects were great. Timing with the sound was also good. Red lightning is definitely original on your part, nice work. Choreography, well, it was done with younger actors, so I can understand if the choreography isn't perfect, but it was still good overall. Ending was great as well. Overall, 4 out of 5 stars!
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cheap
whenever the girl leaves, I think you should have like hugged her :p, if your friends, it makes sense.
ForDerrick 2 years ago
aha. That's true:P
dolekjole 2 years ago
do you need premier to make the lightsabers or just after effects?
fartsam08 2 years ago
Just After Effects. It's possible to make in both programs.
dolekjole 2 years ago
What language is this in?
1985Nebraska 2 years ago
Norwegian
dolekjole 2 years ago