Deceitful Rain

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she lays on the grass surranded by the pooring rain. as se slowly starts to become councious agian, she rea;izes where she is. she tries to sit up and look around to conferim what she knows is the sad truth. she painfully closes he eyesmand thinks about hard about what is going on. te last memory she has hits her like a slap in the face and it all makes sence.

"i love you" he wispers softly into her ears

"i love you too"

she says as her cheaks redden and heart races. he gently brushes his lips agnist ers as he leads her in to a loving kiss. ten his phone rings as he pulls away he wispers

"i'll just be a second "

"okay" she softly replies, her head still spining.after five minutes of him talking into his phone and her standing there akwardly trying not to listen he walked over to her.

"I Have to leave, my mom needs me to do some stuff for her. I'll be back in five minutes. Meet me by the swings?"

"Yes"

and with one last embrace he leaves, the sky starts to sprinkle rain down on to her.she sits on the middle swing and removes her shoes and starts to stick her stubby toes in the sand.

suddenly she heres gun shots start to rig through the air, she stands and looks the direction their somming from. before she can realize what's going on a bullet hits her right in the chest she collapes in the wet grass, noe being stained with her blood.

she stars to regain choncseness when she sees him standing over her praying

"God please let her wake up please God"

her eyes start to flutter with life, and she relizes that she's been shot. the pain starts to shoot through her body, it's pain like no oher she tries to scream but she quickly finds that she can't . he reaches down to take her hand and tells her

"It's gonna be okay i'm right here, and i'm not leaving!"

the loud sound of sirens break through the air. the paramitces lit her up and place her on to a hard board, and she winces in pain. with the love of her life standing beside her just like he said he would

"I love you, I love you, I love you, I love you....."

he keeps repeating to her hopping thet it'll keep her holding on. she wishes with all of her that she could say it bcak but she can't speak. she fights her now heavy eyes from closing. with one last look at him and a gentle squeze of his hand she let's them fall.

months have gone by since the night. i do wish i could say that she was in recovery getting better with everyday that pases, but my mother told me not to lie. his heart still aches forom the pain of loosing the only girl, thing that he had truly loved. since that night he can't look at anything beautiful and think of her. he blames himself, if only he had told his mom to wait, if only he had stayed. he couldn't eat, couldn't think, couldn't sleep. he really did love her, and now she is gone like the wind.....

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