Doctor Who: The Time Manipulator

Doctor Who Series 2 Episode 4

Plot: The Doctor and Donut get called back to Earth by The Time Traveler to investigate a mysterious rift that has appeared nowhere near Cardiff. As they investigate they realise that it was all a decoy, as the Mysterious Time Manipulator kidnappes Donut, Can The Doctor and The Time Traveler save Donut and the universe from destruction.

LN Productions 2009(c)

Category:

Entertainment

Tags:

• Doctor
• Who
• Series
• Episode
• The
• Time
• Manipulator
• Donut
• Traveler
• Luke
• Nyul
• Joshua
• Micheal
• Bray
• LN
• Productions
• 2009

[TheOnComingStorm121]

I'm sorry, but this is direly bad... Poor camera angles, unengaging plot, NO attempt at a Costume for the Doctor...Very poor.

[dalek014]

@TheOnComingStorm121 I can see your point in a lot of things, when i filmed this it was raining on and off so i had to quickly set up camera and roll in the gaps cos one of my cast was only there for one day, it was shot and scripted in 2 days so the plot is a bit crap, but i do think my costume is good, my Doctor is the 73rd, hence the number, the shirt resembles Colin Bakers Coat and i like the idea of stripes on my costume, i think its nifty and simple at the same time

[TheOnComingStorm121]

@dalek014 Wait...What? The shirt bares NO resembelance to the Sixth Doctor's coat...and you're wearing a tracksuit top! I mean come on! You can get suits and waistcoats from Charity shops for a few quid!

[dalek014]

@TheOnComingStorm121 well tbh i might as well keep what im using cos im packing this thing in after a few more stories anyway so i think it wud be stupid to change it now, if u cud travel back in time a couple years and tell my past self that then perhaps i wud change it, but i like it and i havent changed it since i started so i aint gonna change it for only a few more stories

[AlexsFILMS]

nice story, but you need more camera angels like not just one for aages while the characters talk, and i reccoment getting rid of the character Donut, The Character turns this whole series into a comedy and its hard to take it seriosly.

4 Stars

[dalek014]

Thanx for your Comment. That Episode was filmed inbetween every time it rained so we were struck for time so camera angles were gonna delay us. We have planned Donuts leave but not until Early Series 3.

[TheOnComingStorm121]

@dalek014 If I were you...Give it a few years, then start again. You'd be suprised how much ya skills improve after a few years, I was watching MY first fan film I made when I was 13 (I'm now 18) and that was worse than yours...Least you've got green screen. Now I'm doing them, they're 100x better, got myself a unique Doctor, (personality and Costume wise...The costume has cost me a good £300....I need a life..) ,Built myself a console and (The key thing I find) A unique idea.

[TheCybermansFuture]

the doctor who logo is better than the one now!!!!