Final product for class. However, there are some sound issues and it may be easier to hear some things with good speakers, or headphones. It isn't perfect, but its not bad for a first short film. Will be redoing this down the line with better audio, and more scenes. This was also my first attempt at acting, so don't be to hard!
@SerWargrith I appreciate the critique man, and I agree with the criticism. I'll do my best to improve and I'm sure when we re-shoot, it'll be even better.
kardia640 8 months ago
A good first attempt. The audio problems aren't a bid deal. The acting is good for amateurs. Some of the lines were a little cheesy, but that's okay it didn't detract too much from the quality of the whole. The atmosphere was definitely one of the strongest points of this piece. The sound effects came in second. Overall score 8.5/10. For improvements, I can't offer anything big as most will come with time but I will say that there was a time when the dialogue didn't seem to fit the mood to me.
SerWargrith 8 months ago