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Uploaded by on Aug 7, 2011

Hey you guys! I'm SOOOO sorry for not posting for a long time.I kind of lost interest.BUT I'm back AND with a new story! :D I have some ideas that I think you guys are going to like,so please stick it out with me! I don't wanna tell you guys what its about because I wanna keep everything a surprise,but everything is pretty self explanitory:) But please,if you guys can do me a favor,and PLEASE tell your YT friends about this story! I would really appreciate it:) Here we go!

I ran.I ran and ran with no intention of looking back.I could barely withstand the news that was given to me.I was on the verge of loosing my mind.How could he do this to me?To us?To what we had?I gave him my all.My everything.I told him all of my secrets and he told me all of his.We had something special.Something that was worth living for.Something that you can't...no..SHOULDN'T take for granted.I was in love with this young man and all he did was break my heart.I knew i shouldn't have trusted him.Trusted in love because all it does is set you up to let you fall.I quicken my steady pace,trying to get away from him..but he somehow managed to be faster than me.He grabbed my arms firmly and turned me around,making me look at his beautiful face.His features never stopped to amaze me.I looked into his eyes and saw the tears reach the brim of his eyes.He was close to crying.But as for me,the tears were steady coming down.
"Kailey stop and talk to me please!!" He begged
"NO! Get the hell off me!" I demanded.
"Not until you talk to me baby please!"
I snatched my hand away from his grasp.
"I have nothing to say to you!"
I ran my fingers through my hair roughly.Warm tears raced down my face.I looked at his pleading face with anger and sorrow in my eyes.
"Ho-HOW COULD YOU DO THIS SO ME NICK?! WHY THE FUCK WOULD YOU HURT ME LIKE THAT?!"
He looked down at his feet and then back at me.
"I'm so-sorry Kails.."
"Is that seriously all you can say right now?Is that your sorry?"
"Well what else do you want me to say?! I've apologized over and over again and you still haven't forgave me!"
"You expect me to forgive you just that easy Nick?! YOU CHEATED ON ME!"
I went up to him and started throwing punches at his chest.He tried to hold me back,but I just kept swinging.
Eventually,I gave up and collapsed into his arms.He held me close,stroking my hair.
"Shh baby... everythings going to be alright.I love you and I'm so sorry." he said gently.
I wanted to stay like this forever.His familiar cologne sending chills down my spine while he comforted me.Being in his strong arms,feeling as though nothing could hurt me.But it couldt be like this.I couldn't give in.Not this time.This time,I had to be strong.I wiped away the tears off my cheeks and pushed myself away from him.He looked at me,confusued.
"No Nick.I'm not giving into you.."
"What are you talking about Kailey?"
"I ca-... I can't forgive you for this.. this is all to much for me to handle."
He stepped closer to me.
"If there's something you're trying to tell me then say it."
"Fine... I'm done.It's over between us Nick."
I heard a light roll of thunder in the sky as I started to walk away.Rain drops started to fall all around me,making the area around Nick and I look gloomy and depressing.Nick appeared in front of me in an instant,with tears racing down his face.
"Kailey please don't do this to me.. I love you! We were made for each other!"
"That's what I thought too.. but enough is enough.Its about time that I've moved on."
"Baby please don't do this.The only reason I cheated was because after you told me you were moving next week,I just... I just couldn't stand the fact that I was losing the one thing that means the absolute world to me.I panicked.."
I looked into his brown eyes and saw... nothing.When I look into his eyes,I used to see everything.But either they're blank,or I'm blank... I'm just fed up with this.When I looked into his eyes,my eyes weren't letting me see what was really there.The terror,the sadness,and the truth.
"That doesn't matter.If you REALLY loved me,you wouldn't have done what you did."
He pressed his lips to mine roughly,grabbing my fae in the process.Something inside of me wanted to kiss his soft,inviting lips back,but something else,something much stronger then the first something,told me to push away.And that's what I did.
"Nick stop."
"Kails ple-"
"No.Goodbye Nick."
He got down on his knees and pulled my waist to he side of his cheek.This time he was seriously sobbing.But I coudn't let him win.I had to do this for me.I pushed his arms down and walked away.The tears were continuously falling and the rain was coming down harder.I didn't hear any footsteps,so I figured Nick just stayed there.No looking back to the past now.No more boyfriend.No more Nick.Fuck it.I'm done.

I hope you guys liked it! PLEASE give me feedback! No comment/view count,I just need as much feedback as possible! I will hopefully write a couple more chapters this week:) I love you guys!
-Nera :)

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  • :D i see my usernammmmmeeeeeee!

  • that was soo good! poor Kailey! ): ):

    MORE PLEEEASE!

  • Oh....my....f*cking....god....­.

    I absolutely loved it!!

    Like.....woah.....

    Why arent you writing for movies yet?? lmao

  • I loved it girl! Drama in the first chapter! Way to keep a reader interested and coming back for more! (:

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