The Odd Couple for Humorous Duet Act in Drama Competition... Comments, Please!

I apologize for the AVS watermark in the video, but I needed a quick fix. The original footage was too long. This is a scene from Neil Simon's "The Odd Couple" as performed for a Speech and Drama Competition. Please leave comments as to what was good or bad, and what may need to be improved. Thanks, YouTubers!

Category:

Comedy

Tags:

• Odd Couple
• HDA
• Drama Competition
• Neil Simon
• Kelly
• Jericha

[lexipooh22095]

this was alright actually, just keep practicing. the high-pitch whining hurts my ears though so just diffentiate the whining pitch a little please. as for the other girl, i think you do waaay better doing this comedy than your cold blooded murderer video. comedy is your thing, good job and keep working you two :)

[1nedward]

After letting it rest for a day a few things stand out. You two really do have your lines memorized really well. You need to look at your piece and cut the dialogue that doesn't make the speech more interesting and slow down a little. For dramatic effect, pause and let the punch lines set in before you start the next line. Develop and refine your gestures/body language in accordance to the effect you want, should exagerate it. Don't touch the face or hair(its a no no).

Good luck

[1nedward]

You definitely have your lines down pat however I missed a lot of the humor :( Watch the enunciation because I think that becomes an issue when we try to accent our voices and still talk fast. Watch the posture, eye contact seems to be good(you can look around more freely if you want).

[Heepwah2You04]

kelly's such a good whinner. and your good @ being oblivious?.lol.