Mommy, There Is A Bad, Bad Man In My Closet (Original Story)

Yes, I took "The world spreads its legs for another star" from one of Marilyn Manson's songs. I realize this, but it felt so perfect for my story, so I threw it in there. Let me know what you think of my story.

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[bunnyheartsmile]

I holestly don't think it's was that great... But ok and the part where the dad fucks his daughter with the cross reminds me of the part in the exorcist where Linda blaire is all like fuck me Jesus lolz but like what if you got splinters in your croutchO.o that would suck

[gothkid459]

@bunnyheartsmile Well I tried and i get its not that great... thanks.

[pacowillrocko]

@bunnyheartsmile

If you got a splinter in your vagina, even one as invisible as the hairs on an unpeeled carrot, you would bleed to death.

[pacowillrocko]

Im taking the line "Im the "Who" when you call "Who's there?"" from one of mansons songs (this is halloween) and making a story about it. But more Rob Zombie/Michael Myers style. :)

[01xfcuk]

i love it

[AnteMortem17]

@thegrotesksuperstar Thank you! I've been looking for it but I couldn't find it. I now know. Thanks. ^^

[thegrotesksuperstar]

@AnteMortem17, yeah he's listening to My Place Alone by Murderdolls. It's their new song.

[AnteMortem17]

Dude, that's a really creepy laugh you have. Haha. Pretty good story, its very entertaining. And it kinda sounds like the Murderdolls in the beginning in the background. Am I right? Haha.

[MsLucySykes]

Great video!

[thegrotesksuperstar]

Nice.

[TheLowArtGloominati]

I kinda liked the story, personally. I found it humorous.

[rusian1220]

I like the way you illustrate your story.By the way,,my name is eric but not the one in the story.