Yoville Sad story Mother's love

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Category:

Film & Animation

Tags:

• mother
• love
• sonya
• yovillesonyatv
• lia
• lavigne
• sad
• story

[onlykittenlove]

OMG 4K VIEWS.ILY ALL ;D

~Alice

[fallulabell]

its good but your sort of making fun of ppl with cancer :(

[onlykittenlove]

@fallulabell Alice would never do that :O She has cancer herself :(

~Celeste

[1161sam]

loool cancer

[onlykittenlove]

@1161sam wats so funny???

[TheXDLOL101]

That was cute! But you need to work on some things...And that part that she said See? All my hair gone? That was bad..you should've said "Mommy all your hair is gone..."mom""It's so I can be with you forever hunny -hug-" and she should've been laying by her and her mom dies in the middle of the night..

[onlykittenlove]

@TheXDLOL101 Oh PLEASE,I have my ways of animating/writing script,but thank you anyway

[PINKYBUNNY7]

ok well i get really MAD WHEN PEOPLE JOKE ABOUT CANCER SO SORRY

[armadillogirl999]

@PINKBUNNY7 oh my gosh I'm so sorry for you. Hope u survive.

[PINKYBUNNY7]

i have cancer and your making fun of it just kill the yobaby thats really 8575767465 years old

[chongchong14]

I almost cried

[yovillelover1212]

Its fast I have to pause it to read it

[XxPotterForLifexX]

this is a bit of constructive critisism for the future: leave the words on longer, it went away too quick so i couldnt read it. try stretch out the story longer, it was cut a bit too short. Dont put as much of the story in the writing because its better acting it out. Give more of an exciting ending. I hope I helped you. Keep up the good work and keep practising! :)