Like the idea behind this series, it might make a good series. I think you need a new "April". She aint that pretty, and she smiles during the serious talk with her "dad". Didnt understand that part. When she is putting the gun together, you can see her fat on her belly. I would stay away from her being half naked. she looked like she was trying to be a stripper. its just a thought. hope your series goes good.
need new girl. she ugly.
hotmomma2345ify 1 month ago
Like the idea behind this series, it might make a good series. I think you need a new "April". She aint that pretty, and she smiles during the serious talk with her "dad". Didnt understand that part. When she is putting the gun together, you can see her fat on her belly. I would stay away from her being half naked. she looked like she was trying to be a stripper. its just a thought. hope your series goes good.
michaeldowell222 1 month ago
This looks more like a porn. But you need a prettier main character.
bryanbennett0 1 month ago
Well done, Shawnell. Frances
hizproduct 1 month ago
coo
shawnellh 1 month ago
Cuz Im not feelin this at all
aaronsr31 1 month ago