I'd like to offer some constructive criticism. I think your msg sounds like it's got merit. You refer to a piece of paper so I assume that you're talking to a possible consumer for your idea, who's got some materials you've sent. However if you want your msg to benefit from the impact the video can have. You might try to have some visuals and a concise explanation.
even though i am interested in IPTV
i couldnt listen to all of this... sorry
ghostmanno12 2 years ago
chk that comment from visiblemode.
see our idea afterword :)
oryxchannel 3 years ago
I'd like to offer some constructive criticism. I think your msg sounds like it's got merit. You refer to a piece of paper so I assume that you're talking to a possible consumer for your idea, who's got some materials you've sent. However if you want your msg to benefit from the impact the video can have. You might try to have some visuals and a concise explanation.
visiblemode 5 years ago