Switzerland APH Audition (improv lines)

There is another more precise video with the main audition lines.

VAA Lines: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1DuJVrkVqgw&fmt=18
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Any critiques or suggestions would be AWESOME.
First time recorder here, so I'm totally cool with any input.
Also, promise to get better programs/equipment if I'm picked (though some suggestions on what good recording programs/equipment are would also be great ^^;)

Thanks for listening!

Extra lines: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6pWYf1Q8mes&fmt=18
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Nation's name: Schweizerische Eidgenossenschaft (this is German for The Swiss Confederation)
Capital: Berne
Languages: German, French, Italian, Romansh, etc.
Birthday: August 1st
National flower: Endelweiss

Human name: Vash Zwingli
Height: Unknown
Age: 18

An eternally neutral nation that lives seemingly as a social hermit/recluse, surrounded by the grand Alps.
Even though Switzerland has an image of being peaceful, he is the biggest producer of guns in the world, has the biggest military strength and holds the world's wallet. With this, he is able to be the eternal neutral nation because other nations are unable to really lay a hand on him.
Was originally born as a nation from strong unions/treaties, but because he doesn't have many relations with other nations, he hates outsiders (foreigners).
He will work hard on a job until the very last detail is finished.
He also has a past achievement of being hired by the Vatican as a mercenary.

Category:

Entertainment

Tags:

• Switzerland
• APH
• Hetalia
• Fandub

[linkitachan]

all the characters played by romi paku in japanese version are really hard to fandub -3-

[KokoroKiseki]

Considering that Switzerland is voiced by a girl in the anime and that nobody has a perfectly static-free mic, don't say anybody is fail to all anime just because of that.

[GooCoooorp]

is this for a hetalia abridged or something? cuz it's probably hard to abridge hetalia.

[funnotfunny]

i would do the second line :]

[christine326]

My friend and I are holding a voice audition for our fanime right now, if you think it's interesting, it'll be awesome if you join the audition ^^

- Image Core Studio: Christine326

[christine326]

u really sound like him in english dub xDD

5/5 :D

[arisadelle]

Well I have a new mic now, and since I did get the part without a penis and with a static-tastic mic, that just makes me win doesn't it? :)

Also, do you know where the game is? 'Cause I think I lost it.

[Angelictroublemaker]

hahah YODELAHEEE!!!!

[thepumpenator]

not bad, i actually think for fan dubs, you should try a slight french to german accent, i think it adds a level of authenticity to the fandubs, just my opinion of course