the glucowatch
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Best thing: It was easy for me to understand why the glucowatch would be beneficial, even though I don't know much about dealing with diabetes. It is something that I would definitely recommend to a friend because it clearly overcomes so many hurdles.
Improvement: Reserve the zooming for effect of important things - like when you want to emphasize that a regular glucometer hurts, zoom on the blood instead of panning past it.
~Michelle
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Pros: Nice music and it obviously a useful idea
Cons: The drawing were not that clear, so it was hard to follow some of your ideas. Using live actors with mock ups of the system would have improved it.
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The motivation behind and advantages to the device were really clear. Your use of the Ken Burns effect was a bit distracting, though. Ordinarily, Ken Burns' uses his eponymous effect with a detailed photograph, focusing on parts of the photograph to reinforce a voice over. The effect tended to obscure the effect of your drawings; however, if you had used photographs instead, it would have been much clearer.
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+: Very clear problem and solution, even though I don't know too much about Type I diabetes myself. Elegant solution that is demonstrated very well.
-: Constant panning may be distracting for some users. It would have been nice to get a good, clear, zoomed view of the watch and all the features displayed. Might be clearer to add something like "buzz buzz" to make it clearer @0:57.
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- Silvia
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Best thing: The video is very effective. It conveys all the relevant issues and doesn't get bogged down with the details. Even someone who has no experience with Type 1 diabetes can quickly and easily grasp the problem, the solution, and why your solution is particularly good. Very elegant!
Improvement: I don't understand what the shots at 0:08-0:16 are showing, other than a general idea of implements for testing blood sugar.
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Best: It was to the point and really targeted the audience. The repeating message that you just know worked really well. The storyboard was lighthearted and the zombies were awesome!
Improvement: At times the pace could have been just a tad slower, and there could have been a lot less moving of the slides. The constant moving made it hard at times to actually see what was sketched. - Jasper
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Best: There's a strong connection with the audience -- you don't waste time explaining things like a glucometer because they know already, which I think builds confidence.
Improvement: I wish that you had taken a little more time to do more explanation later in the video -- you rushed things like why there's a watch on the glucowatch, and I worry that sometimes the important features you've really thought through aren't making it into the audience's heads.
Targeted very well. Clearly you know your audience enough to strip out everything but the most salient.
Would have liked a clearer transition to solution. Maybe coloring the watch would have helped introduce it. Or inverting the colors at that time.
Also, unclear about what technology could actually make this a reality - but I also know that wasn't a requirement for making the design :-)
tkriplean 2 years ago
@tkriplean I totally struggled over introducing the actual sensor technology behind the design or no - it was a rough decision to just go with the user experience. Great comment!
cortneyaleach 2 years ago
Perhaps not a good idea to broadcast this, but I had a really hard time balancing the pluses/minuses of the Ken Burns effect! I started using it for solid focusing reasons, but then I couldn't decide when to stop! Because, well, when you start using it, you'd better make sure there's a clear reason to stop using it. But I totally over Ken Burnsed. Sigh. The design is never done...
cortneyaleach 2 years ago