New Series (Untitled) *Prologue*

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Uploaded by on Apr 28, 2009

VIdeo FIRST!
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On a winter morning, flakes flew down from the heavens parachuting to the light-milked colored snow, some drew spects on the roses that were planted. Her Dad had just gone out for some lumber the weather was dropping, the cabin didn't really help her from the cold. Rose was petting Layla her pet cat, she stared at the clock 7:31 almost time for school she sighed then walked over to the mirror her appearance was a girl with a curved body, a heart-shaped face, a widows peak attached with Brown-reddish hair laid waved, eyes blue tinted in grayish-white, Snowy teeth hidden behind plumed lips , brows curved, her nose was tiny and blushed from the cold, freckles faded off her cheeks, lashes were long and curved,and her voice sounded lush the sweetest thing you'd ever hear; she smiled visualizing her mother standing beside her. Oh, how she wished that her mother were here to see her daughter all grown up. Rose was taken-aback; times when she praciticed dancing in her studio when she used to be a ballerina. But now her mother was gone she couldn't even twirl for all that she tried. It would only make her feel sad inside, so now she kept her past a secret. She was only 5 when she lost her mother, Her father had handed her a letter when finally she asked what happened. Her name written in black ink: Rossella Waterfalls, noone has ever called her by her birthname in such a long time. The only time she hears it is in her dreams when her mom is calling her. The letter: her mom had told her how much she loved her, when if she received this letter that she was already graduated from college(but she haven't and Rose got it earlier//Only a junior), how She'll be a beautiful mom, but that was it..nothing else.
*Rose's P.O.V*
I heared the door slam and footsteps coming nearer, dad walks past the door acting like I didn't exist. My father doesn't look at me much, I knew the reason why because I resembled as my mother. I sighed in the thought, tightening a blue bow around my ponytail exactly how my mom use to. I reached for my backpack threw it over both my shoulders, I walked out the door without eating breakfast; somehow I usually lose my appetite in the morning. I turned around seeing Bobby was waiting for me out on my steps spots of snow fell to his shoulders. A boy with long hair, not in a girl length but swiftly, he wore a gray plain shirt with a military liked jacket, black jeans, toned pale, and built-up a muscular body. Bobby and I knew eachother for quite a while, one day at school I was the new girl not knowing anyone. Everyone was a complete stranger to me, I was translucent if I walked through a crowded hallway and said "excuse me" they'd ignore me and get in my way. People didn't even notice me, looked at me, nor even tried to say hi. During lunch if I would ask a group if I could eat with them, they didn't even care to respond I looked like an idiot talking to myself. The next day I was in luck because Bobby came along. He wasn't actually new though he told me he transfered back to the school. Which made sense because practically everyone was giving him nods and handshakes, every girl smiled to his appearence. Then I wondered why he choose me to hang around with? Bobby is my only Bestfriend, I'm still invisible to everybody; but I can't ask for much in the world I live in. I tap Bobby's shoulder and he gives me this smile that makes his green eyes widen. I stared into his eyes for a while and for a complete second I felt drowsier than ever . An image of my mother came into my mind; I tipped over to my side and the pressure rose up the snow fell heavier, but Bobby kept me steady while looking up above. I shook my head in confusion, he focused and held up my cheek. "Woah.. You alright there?", Bobby asked frightengly. "Yeah......I'm ok....", I responded. He put his arm around my shoulder asking me once again if I was ok, I nod. That never happened before... I took a glimpse at my rose patch the petals had fallen to the ground. My mind flew right back in focus suprised, Running quickly and sliding to the ground my knees hit the floor gathering the petals with my hands. My fingers grew numb and ice started piling upon my fingers it grew over to my arms; I yelled and let go of the petals. Bobby ran over to me, hugging me from behind asking me what happened. But when I try to speak nothing comes out, and he didn't see anything.
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I hoped you liked the prologue.
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  • a title could be "Love is a Rose"

    or "The fallen Petals"

    are u gonna make this with celebrities for example like demi lovato as rose and nick jonas as bobby?

  • No, Sorry...This is a different series.

    But you can picture the story with them if you'd like like.

    :)

  • Great U r a great writer

    1. Rose in the light

    Rose figuring it out

    or just rose! Idk really but i do like it

    2. both...

    3. uhmmm are we gonna find out wat happened to her mom

  • thx!

    You'll find out soon... :)

  • first off, YOUR AN AWESOME WRITER.

    1. i have no ideas on titles, sorry.

    2. next chapter for either one, doesn't matter to me.

    3. i understood everything.

    woaah, Rose is really pretty, the way you described her :)

  • thxx!

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  • how about rose about to fall

  • I was thinking

    1. Roses At Dawn

    2. Fallen Petal

    3. Pearl of the Rose

    4. Twilight Roses

    what do youuuuu like?

  • WOW!!!! That was AMAZING you should write more!!!! Here are my ideas for titles but they arent the greatest....

    1. Love is On It's Way

    2. Rose Petals Fallen

    3. Ribbons and Roses

    thats all I have... I hope you like them!!!!

  • Lol, thanks!

  • alrighty I'll be there to watch it then ;)

  • O-M-G!

    AH-MAZZING!!!!!!!!

    I'm no good at making titles so sorry if mine sucks. :(

    How about "Rose Petals"?

    Anyway, LOVED it!

    MY SERIES COMES OUT IN ONE FREAKING DAY MAN!!!!!!!!!!!

    WHOOPIE!!!!!!!!! :D

    I'm SO stoked. :D

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