Tellin' Me Lies - Original Song - Acoustic Version

Hi...this is a song that me and my friend Lil have written called "Tellin' Me Lies".....we've been practising together for about 12 months on and off but we don't put enough time in to our songs due to family commitments....lets hope 2007 sees a more creative side to us...it's also our first attempt at making a video so forgive me now for the poor lighting and picture quality, I'll improved on that for next time...hope you like our song and please comment as the feedback might help us....thanks!

You can download the MP3 here:-
http://soundcloud.com/neouk2008/tellin-me-lies


Tellin' Me Lies


I can't live here without you
And I can't do the things you do
And you just hang your head in shame
And say it's just some, just some silly game

Chorus:
But it came as no suprise
I could see it in your eyes
Your tellin' me lies
Tellin' me lies, tellin' me lies
Tellin' me lies again

I would love you each and everyday
But I can't play the games you play
And I would of shown you, shown you a better life
But your love just cuts me, cuts me like a knife (Yeah,Yeah)

Chorus:
But it came as no suprise
I could see it in your eyes
Your tellin' me lies
Tellin' me lies, tellin' me lies
Tellin' me lies again

Just, Just tell me what went wrong
So we can try to get along
Let's sit, let sit and work it out
Without, without the, without need to shout (Yeah,Yeah)

Chorus:
But it came as no suprise
I could see it in your eyes
Your tellin' me lies
Tellin' me lies, tellin' me lies
Tellin' me lies again


And your standing over there
And I'll walk if you don't care
Cause I'm sick of all this pain
What do you have to gain
By tellin' me lies, tellin me lies
Telling me lies, by telling me lies again

Get out of my life..............get out of my life
I don't need you love, standing over there
You don't seem to care, you don't seem to care (Kill Drums)
Standing over there

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[funkinsweetgamer18]

i love the raw acoustic feel to this song. i think personally the drum machine may even be too much for an acoustic version. it adds a nice back beat in this video. so that'd be your call. but i like the way it sounds.

[NeoUK1965]

@funkinsweetgamer18 Thanks for your input...:-)

[krybabiikate]

are you using a drum machine? the drum part sounds really empty. so i was just wondering. the lyrics are really good as is your singing, but you strain on the screaming part and drift sharp. but keep writin and playin and stuff. i just happened upon ur video because i was looking for a song to tell someone to stop lying and to leave me alone...but i havent had any luck yet and y'alls is like the twentieth one i have watched. good job.

peace

*kate*

[NeoUK1965]

Hi Kate, thanks for your comments, yes it's a drum machine and yes I do strain my voice in parts but thanks for your support...I hope you find what your looking for..:)..Paul.

[J2897]

I will give pure honesty:

Good shit.. Definitely add a slight echo to the mic, Maybe swap that guitar with an electric ("Maybe") and give the drums a bit more welly.

Name of band: Avalanche

.. I'm no musician, I'm just speaking from a listeners shoes.

I'm about to lose everything I own; including my home, don't even now why I'm posting a response here, anyway good luck.

[NeoUK1965]

Hi, Thanks for posting, I appreciate your input, yes your right on all counts, I have done a mix with echo but I felt it lost it's raw acoustic feel..as for the electric part..yes..we have tried a second guitar that my friend Bri plays..he does a solo part and fill in...sounds sweet but as yet we've not got together to finalise it and lay it down...thanks for your comments..:)

Paul.

Paul.

[Xcell93]

Bravo! Pretty good for a first video, Like the bit where you gotta keep trying drums off.

Good job!