Light Of My Love (An Original Song) UK Songwriting Contest 2008 Semi-Finalist
Uploader Comments (bunchie1966)
All Comments (17)
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this is a sweet and lovely song, Bunchie... :) keep singing and smiling and God bless you!
Tami
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Beautiful, dreamlike.
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yh quite good
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Great stuff. Wish I had that talent. Don't listen to people like Hazysunlight who just love to criticize. Ed
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Nice song, bunchie! Thanks for sharing! :)
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This is my favorite song of yours. I like the chords and the second half has a cool attmosphere with that vocal or synthetic harmony.
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I have to say bunchie, this is my fav video from your entries. good Percussions (i missed it on the other two i saw, so i thought ill comment on this seperatly), nice melody and again great lyrics, i just think you sang a little to high on the bridges. But thats nothing to worry about, Its a great piece of work. Although it sounds a little familiar.
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wtg again
This is a great song, and my favourite of yours so far!
VictoriaWinters 3 years ago
Thanks for the encouragement; glad you liked it.
bunchie1966 3 years ago
Interesting structure, I really expected you to shift to a major tonality for the second section, but staying minor really made this one outstanding. The ending needs work, sounds like you weren't quite sure what you wanted to do with it.
HazySunlight 3 years ago
Thanks for the evaluation; actually I was quite pleased with the ending; I though bringing in the guitar to finish it off was a way of ending the song, while giving a final, brief reminder of the solo in the middle - what would be your suggestion?
bunchie1966 3 years ago
Ths is one of my faves so far... I really like this, I keep coming back to this one ...
richpat 3 years ago
Glad you like it. It was written from the heart.
bunchie1966 3 years ago