Also, as an editing tip: When the detective asked "Why do you know that" twice there should have been a pause in between each of those lines that show the emotions of the mother.
Perhaps it was the fault of the directors, but despite a fairly well written script I felt as though many of the lines were not presented very well. The mother was explaining how she wanted the detective to refer to her son but those lines should have been done WHILE the detective was talking. They were supposed to be lines that would interrupt the conversation and yet you women kept giving each other turns to speak which does not look realistic AT ALL.
Also, as an editing tip: When the detective asked "Why do you know that" twice there should have been a pause in between each of those lines that show the emotions of the mother.
Just trying to be constructive!
pbturkey2 1 year ago
Perhaps it was the fault of the directors, but despite a fairly well written script I felt as though many of the lines were not presented very well. The mother was explaining how she wanted the detective to refer to her son but those lines should have been done WHILE the detective was talking. They were supposed to be lines that would interrupt the conversation and yet you women kept giving each other turns to speak which does not look realistic AT ALL.
pbturkey2 1 year ago