You Win (Original Song by Me)

*poor quality alert*

I wrote this song about 2 months ago and I know I'm not the greatest singer, but I've been playing the piano for a long time and I love writing music. Enjoy :)

Lyrics:

You Win

Verse 1:
She's beautiful,
Her blonde hair dances on her collarbone.
She trembles with the thought of you.
And don't think I don't do that too.
She shows up in a party dress,
And suddenly I've become second best.
Can't do more to make you love me,
Make you feel.
Make you say things that aren't real.
You don't love me,
And you never will.

Chorus:
Well, you win,
You can have him.
I don't deserve,
Things I can't fathom.
One more night,
And he'll say it's over.
He can't leave me,
When he's sober.

Verse 2:
She's laid in your bed,
You have caressed her on the floor.
No way in hell does she love you with all her heart and more
She's so soft, her body silky smooth,
So what exactly are you trying to prove?
Can I ask you?
Where are my flowers?
Where's my rose,
Am I the girl you said you'd hold?
You don't love me,
And the situation's getting old.

Chorus

Bridge:
Why couldn't you just say it's over,
It's too late to say it now.
Say you'll make it up to me somehow.
Tell me how you're so sorry,
Wipe up all your fake tears.
Because after all my pain, I am absolved of all my fears.
Never have I ever seen,
Me get over someone so quickly

Chorus:
Well, you win,
You can have him.
I don't deserve,
Things I can't fathom.
One more night,
And he'll say it's over.
He can't leave me,
When he's sober.
Well she wins,
She can have you.
I don't deserve things I don't want to.
One more night,
And you'll say it's over.
You can't leave me,
When you're sober.
Try and leave me when you're sober.
Don't deceive me,
Without me it gets so much colder.

Category:

Music

Tags:

• original
• song
• you
• win
• asian
• girl
• singing
• piano
• pop
• folk
• indie

[drumhyper2]

How far do you want to go? You have what it takes musically to make it. Have fun and thanks for the music.

[xoriginalbutterflyx]

I'd love to get a record deal, of course, haha, but right now I'm focusing on school so it's more of a side thing. :)

[faheemthedream2007]

nice job, but take a look at the lyrics..

[xoriginalbutterflyx]

yeah some of them are a bit off, but that's just cuz I changed the words

[djevins010]

wow your really good!

I wrote a song to but it doesnt really sound like a real song....and this does...really good i think you will go far in life especially being a song writer and the singing is good to. i only have one video and its the song i wrote...

you dont have to check it out if you dont want to...it sucks

well im gonna go look at some of your other videos

[xoriginalbutterflyx]

hehe I watched your vid, it was different :) very nice

[bigbangninjaa]

you have talent! see you on mtv!

[SweetPinkLemon]

UHM WOW. Girl, you can definatley sing, and write lyrics!! OMG seriouslyyy you need to get signed somewhere everyone should hear your voice. Your a great singer!

[destyniiskywalker]

anyways (ran over the word limit on the previous post)...i like how you didn't follow the conventional rock style but made the song follow your own lyrics instead. your creativity inspires me, lol:P

~Wendi <3

[destyniiskywalker]

it's interesting how you change the style & rhythm 3 times during the verse, lol...but i love the rubato on the lyrics "can't do more to..." (such a classical concept^^). and that whole section

~"can't do more to make you love me

make you feel

make you say things that aren't real

you don't love me

and you never will"~

nearly made me cry. so true...and it suited the melody you had going on there perfectly. the "i don't deserve things i can't fathom" part was also very touching.