Uploaded by PeppermintDom on Sep 9, 2008
Since the last chapter was like supershort, I decided to be nice and update :) This time we have Nick :)
*Nick's POV*
So I'm playing Sorry, the first verse then chorus and in the middle of chorus and the second verse I hear loud banging on my door. So I stop playing, put the guitar next to me, stand up and I started walking up to the door. I didn't want to ask who it was because then, well she'd go away and it be ruined. So I open the door and who do I see? A very VERY angry Getlin. Yes. She looked a bit angry, but it looked like she had forgotten something. She was in her PJ's which included a black tank top and black and pink capris. But the body parts that were "out there" they were.. just wow.. my mouth actually fell open in shock as I saw her. She had been wearing long sleeved tops all the time, I didn't even give it much thought but now I totally get it. She was COVERED in scars! Her face seemed to be the only part that was NOT in scars. It was so sad to watch her. Then she started talking.
"Hi Nick. Umm.. I was just wondering if you could stop playing Sorry?" She asked me very calmly. She is soo falling into my plan.
"Why?" I asked with a innocent face.
"Because.. Well.. *she had really hard time lying up an excuse so by the looks of it she decided to tell the truth* I don't like it." She said and crossed her arms. And with that her scars were jumping out even more.
"But why? I thought you liked our songs?" I asked with a even more innocent face.
"Well, I DID. But then *that* song came out and then I just couldn't anymore.." She said, trailing off.
"But why not this song? I couldn't be that bad. You can tell me you know. You used to tell me stuff. Why not now?" I asked, her looking intensely into her eyes.
"Yes, I used to tell you stuff, because that was easy. I can't tell you what happened with me during my "kidnapping"*she actually does the air quotes around the word*."
"Why?"
"Well. 2 reasons. 1st you wouldn't understand. No one will, unless they have been through it. And 2nd I don't want to tell you."
"But I want you to."
"NO YOU DON'T" She shouted. Wow. She goes to shouting FAST!
"Yes. I do."
"Fine. You think you do? Let's go to you room then." She walks in. It's working."Close the door. And you better take a seat." So I did what she said.
"Are you really really sure?" She asked me with a worried face.
"Yes, I am."
"But you can't go back from knowing that. Just remember that I warned you." I nodded.
"Do you want the dirty details or what?" She asked me.
"Well, as much as you want to tell me."
"I'd rather not tell you anything about it, but you want to know. So do I start from when I got to LA or from my "kidnapping"?" She asked me.
"From your arrival to LA."
"Well, then. Your wish is unfortunately my command. But remember I warned you. OK. So, the story.." She started talking as she sat down on the floor, back on the wall and legs crossed in front.
So what'd you think? And I'm gonna write her story in the next one. Sorry.. You're gonna wait. I don't know how long though because it depends on how fast you guys comment. Because on this one I need at least 5 comments, so when there's 5 comments you shall see the new chapter with her story. I promise.
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I actually posted the next chapter, but stupid YouTube took it down.
So I'll do my best and write it again this weekend.
PeppermintDom 3 years ago
This story is really good!
post more soon! plz?!?
jobub11 3 years ago