I've been feeling pretty low few months ago, problems seemed to pile up, and I went through a tough time.
I wrote a poetry in english then, and I wanted to sing it out. But the english lyrics are too simple since it's just a stupid poetry, it wasn't suitable for a melody.
I've just started to learn a bit about the Japanese language. Still haven't mastered it, so I'm sure everyone will laugh at me about this. Not a smart arse wannabe, just giving it a try.
With the help of some textbooks and the internet I tried to translate the lyrics the best I can.
I didn't know what instruments I should be playing for this song. First time using a program like this, actually I don't really know how to use it... so it sounds pretty dumb. I added in some guitar and violin parts in the chorus to feel better. I don't know why the vid stopped before the ending. It's supposed to have a decent ending. Sorry bout it.
Ok. I'm so talkative.
Ok on second thought, please, ignore the lyrics.
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Make ta kibou
Kurayami de ushinawa reru
Jibun jishin o kataku nigiru
Boku wa mada megasame te iru
Matte iru koto
Odosu chinmoku wa boku no attou suru
Mohaya hanasa nai
Kore ijou kika nai
Kesshite mouchido mi nai
Komatte i, kakki ga nai
ino kouka toshite
Boku dake yori tsuyokere ba
Sou sora basho de hikkake rareru
Boku wa osore te iru
Jiyuu ni kowareru koto nai
Boku ga yuuki ni kake te iru node
Yukkuri kusaru boku no karada
Boku dake saido arui te mo ikere ba
Chuu musei sakebi, sasayaki
Boku wa kiku koto ga deki nai
Kore ijou kika nai
Kesshite mouchido mi nai
Komatte i, kakki ga nai
ino kouka toshite
Boku dake yori tsuyokere ba
Yori tsuyoi...
POETRY:
Wretched...
I'm lost in the darkness
I hold myself, tightly
I'm still awake
Waiting...
Engulfed by the threatening silence
I no longer speak
I hear nothing
And I can see no more
Helpless, lifeless
as I descent
If only I'm stronger
Confined in a place so empty
I fear of being incapable to break free
Because I lack the courage
My body, slowly mouldering
If only I can walk again
The silent scream inside me
Not even a whisper
I can never be heard
Music and lyrics ©Shio Yee
you're so... amazing. and your music relaxes me so much. When I had a horrible day like today, nothing but your songs released the tension from my shoulders. Thank you.
Jessicarijos 2 years ago 19
.....utterly awe-inspiring..... I can't even think of any words to describe it....
MissZeroKiryuu 2 years ago 17