snowfeet's poem collective - line 4

Snowfeet's original video:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0A8QGgK1-YI

Line 1 (snowfeet):

- I wake up singing a song Ive never heard before

Line 2 (tinySpectacle):

- The clock itches seconds, a standard-issue army blanket of possibility

Line 3 (Jadabh3):

- Moments ago, amazed at the lightshow on the back of lids

Line 4 (QualiaSoup):

- I found my room fidgeting with apparitions in the granular dark

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Tags:

• poem
• snowfeet
• tinySpectacle
• Jadabh3

[tinySpectacle]

I missed this!! Great line, Soup! Do your talents know no bounds?

[QualiaSoup]

Thanks very much, Lo. (I'm not worthy! ;^>) I do hope snowfeet ends up with some finished pieces - I know Link's adding a line sometime soon...

[ClumsyRoot]

"...granular dark." I like that.

[QualiaSoup]

Thanks, CR. :^>

[Shikami42]

what the hell is that????

i like it

[QualiaSoup]

Cheers, Shikami!

[culvre]

beautiful, indeed.

[brendanmcwilliams]

That was really good. I especially liked the lightshow on the back of lids part.

[VannahWilson]

That was cool! This is a wonderful use of your voice, reading poetry! If that were a PAID JOB, you'd be PERFECT for it! *sigh* I love your accent. :D

I can definitely relate to the surreality of this poem. XD I love your visuals (in all your vidoes — how do you make them?), and the way you used them for this poem was great. Perfect emulation of the poem's strangeness.

[VannahWilson]

@TheEyesOfNye Lol, well that chick who wrote Mushi-shi would say it's because we've forgotten how to close our second eyelid. XD It probably has to do with the fact that our brains never shut the hell up.

[danieldvs100]

i JUST subbed you. glad i did. do you still make these? or have you stopped?

[TheEyesOfNye]

Why do we see those strange colours and patterns when we close our eyes tightly or massage our closed eyes with the palms of our hands?

[bloodrocker2]

lol, i used to see those colors on the wall when i was 4 years old. i thought they were tv shows playing on the cieling :p

[33stribe]

i see a heart and brain was behind this, with all its passion. and that i only but the thing a great poet needs is hes searh to find inner and utter peace.

[micashergan]

Another great video!