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My first poem written in class

Most wouldnt suspect her
But what they dont know
That life is her play, and she is the actor in this show

She wears a mask crafted ever so carefully
The perfect portrayal of happiness

In hopes to conceal the affliction
That lies beneath

She cant pull herself up from a puddle
Yet she is swimming in an ocean
Where all she can do is drowned

She is walking in the rain
Each drop acting as a weight
Pressing down on her already heavy shoulders

She is suffocating

No one seems to notice, as if she were a spirit
Try as she might to scream, it were as if her mouth
Had been rusted shut

The feeling of happiness erased from her mind,
Senses dulled, leaving reality behind

She is a zebra with no stripes, an outcast,




Her body weighting heavily and wearing thin,
The gleaming faces of each passerby,
She wishes to melt into them,

She is detached from this world,
It seems just a dream,
Her wish to wake up impossible it seems

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[scrappymeat]

It's good mate!!

Check mine..

/watch?v=1f_9ZwirUes

[hahaha667]

@scrappymeat Thanks! : )

[Mileschild27]

amazing poem<3 you're really good :)

[hahaha667]

@Mileschild27 Thank you :D

[allisonftw18]

i really like this

i write similar stuff and i think you are realy talented

keep writing i want to hear more

-allison

[s16penser]

Wow

[sasysuen13]

loved it

[deathwalk60]

I enjoyed your poem. I hope that you write as make more poetry based films. By the way, the word Helpness one the palm of the hand was a good touch for this poem. The lack of music made it more real to me.

[TaylorLynnRoxSox]

this is really good! It would make a GREAT song!!

[kylieandsusie]

that was so good..

[Satine5Syd]

You could easily make this into a song of your own :)

xox