This one is going somewhere. Is it finished? I bet you could expand on this one and make it even better. Of course keep in mind all poetry is subjective. If it's done for YOU it's done, my comment are only how "I" see it. Well done this hits a nerve.
great stuff mister!
marycigarettes 3 years ago
This one is going somewhere. Is it finished? I bet you could expand on this one and make it even better. Of course keep in mind all poetry is subjective. If it's done for YOU it's done, my comment are only how "I" see it. Well done this hits a nerve.
MrDaMan 3 years ago