Everlost A Twilight story ep 1

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New Series!
3RD PERSON POV!
On an sharp turn, above the dead, weeping tree forest on no day in particular A black Toyota crashed into a yellow Porshe blending into a blur of gray.
In the front seat of the Toyota a girl named Isabella Swan sat. Preffered to be called Bella. Bella was having an argument on how loud the radio should be playing and that she has to bring her ipod everytime she wants to listen to music in the car. Bella had just taken off her seatbelt to adjust her blouse that was crimpling up frfom the wind blowing from the windows. In the center of the backseat of the Porshe, was Edward Cullen. He was dressed in a tux for his cousin Sarahs wedding, and trying to eat a chocolate hersheys bar. He rolled up his sleeves to do so. His sister and brother on the other side of himself reapiditly moved and jostling his elbows causing the chocolate to smear across his cheek. A car meant for four, Had five passengers and so Edward had no seatbelt. Also on the road was a sharp peice of medal or was it steal? Well he caught a glmpse of it in the road. All other cars were avoiding it but the Porshe didnt have the same luck and ran right over it causing the front tire to blow and Edwards father to loose control of the car.
As the car moved across the yellow double lines screams were heard and Both Edward and Bella looked up to see the cars quickly move closer to eachother. No, They didn't see their lives flash before them because it happened to quickly, Yet they managed to look in eachothers eyes before colliding. None of them felt the impact. But were launched foward into the airbags which did nothing at the increasing speed with no seatbelts but slow them down a tiny bit. They felt the windshields against their forheads as the sound of shattering glass followed. Everything went dark. Bella didn't know what to make of this yet. As the windshield fell behind her, her body was bieng taken with the strong rush of the wind. There was a point of light wat the end of the tunnel that grew brighter and larger the closer she got...She suddenly felt a wave of calmness amazingly. She suddenly hit something that sent her of course. The smell of chocolate was overwhelming her. She grasped at the object grunting then realizing it was another person who bumped her. Both Edward and Bella went flying threw the black walls of the darkened tunnel and went spinning crazily and as they passed the walls the light at the end of their course was no longer there or visable. They hit the ground with a hard pound and then went into a dreamless sleep for a long, long, time.
??? Pov
???: * I havent beeen up to the road in a long time. Longer than long. What was the point though? Cars just passed through without a hint that I was lurking in the woods waiting for an accident to happen. When I heard the accident up above I was playing one of my favorite games. Leaping to high branches. Branch by branch. When I heard the crash of the sudden steel I lost course and fell hitting each branch ont he way down. Of course it didnt hurt at all. I just laughed. It was a fall that certaiinly would of ended my life. But circumstances are different here in EverLost. I heard people screaming and cars screeching to a stop. I hurried off to the top of the mainland where the sounds were comming from. Oh sure their are accidents all the time up here but everytime the people always got to where they needed to go. Heaven...Or hell. One time a car skidded into my forest smack dab in the center. But of course noone came with it. Of course at first but they always got to the light at the end of the unknown tunnel. The accident was bad. Very, very bad. Fire trucks, Ambulences, Police Cars, They were everywhere! It was past dark when all trucks and sighns of the accident were gone. I frowned. Everyone made it to the light again. I climbed back down the trees a little mad no one else came. But who cares? This is MY place. I would play my games over and over again. Day after day. Eventually the road its self will be gone. Maybe in 100 years or so. I was reaching the bottom of the tree when I saw them... Two kids! Laying on the forest floor with no scratches or bruises or anyhting broken. That was a good sighn! That means their here! Their here with me!
"Welcome to everlost!" I said knowing they wouldnt hear me.
* What do you think? Is it good? Should i continue? I know your confused but bare with me!*

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  • its good

  • @Jayfeatherisawsome THANKS! The next ones up too

  • It's kinda counfusing

  • @Teddey9999 just wait it gets better and ill explain in the next eppy

  • it's a bit confusing but i want to read more

  • @xcheermadx Well I know why its confusing but ill give u a sneak peak in a message! :D

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  • nice

  • I am kind of confused but I LOVED IT :))

  • it good but i am really confused

  • I LIKE IT, thought it is a little cofussing, well more or less all the big, wonderful stories are a bit strange the first pages then they always get better and better and as al your stories are magical an i like them all i suppose this one is gonna be hilarious!

  • *after i watched* WOW!!!!!! luv it!!! poor lonely.... something or other and poor ed and bella!

  • *before i read this* ugh girl you starting ANOTHER series!?!! you dun lost your mind!!! just kidding lol either way i bet its great!!!!!

  • @twilightqueen1000 ill explain in the next eppy

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