Alright so this is just a random song. I just wrote whatever was coming to my mind down. Don't judge it too hard cuz it was done really quick and i decided to record and put it up. Also, if you don't get the last 4 lines go to the following link, this is what im referring too and mimicking:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w5L96U4ULNk
And here are the lyrics:
All you haters keep on hating, keep on discriminating
On my lyrical talents, bout which there is no debatin
Its insane how many fuckin hate comments Im gettin
Rap is another form of art, you fools just need educatin
So if my art is a masterpiece, you can call me Picasso
And if I were paintin a picture of you, itd be an asshole
I got no money, got no cars but I do got a name
So I am shootin for the stars, makin the highest my aim
Try to forgive and forget, try to wipe the slate clean
But how am I supposed to forget something that just repeats
So once again Im gonna try and forget these complications
I rest my case Mr.Hater, any obligations?
You say Im not on your level, you say Ive only begun
And yet youre still running the marathon, Ive already run
Im 15, but im still a vet in the game
I maybe a Paki but im still a threat in the game
Im climbing the ladder, theyre stuck in the same mindframe
their accomplishments arent a threat, cuz I still gain
Like Pac in Cali, these streets Im about to serenade
And like Jay-Z and Em, Im a mothafuckin renegade
im the answer to your prayers if your prayin for change
so how can you compare us and be sayin we the same?
Are you sane? Or are you simply insane?
Cuz youve just unleashed and released a beast untamed
Ayte so listen you suckas, I aint here to impress
But if you put me to the test, expect success
All these haters wanna start beef, they wanna scrap
But I dont give a fuck, homie ima still rap
Ima keep doin my thing, and you keep doin yours
I aint tryna to bring you down, cuz you already on the floor
You dont know what I been through, you dont know nothin
So why you all up in my face B, why you keep frontin
When I spit, I spit the truth
If you got somethin against me, ima knock ya tooth
Right out of ya mouth, yall know what im about
Im one of the only rappers keepin it real in the drought
So keep on hatin, keep on tryna be cruel
Cuz you haters dont do shit, but provide me the fuel
That I need to keep on burnin and attackin this mic
And I shouldnt even be concernin cuz im smackin this like
Those faggots on them Indian reality shows
How could she slap? Mothafucka, only god knows
Now Im done here so Ima show you the door
There it is Mothafucka, you go?
work on ure flow man .
sneakerchamp23 1 year ago
@sneakerchamp23 this was 2 years ago, listen to my newer songs, my flow's improved
ShaheemA13 1 year ago
this is pretty sick and the rap i made waswnt suppose to be seroius
officialEKchannel 2 years ago
lol yeah i figured that haha and thanks
ShaheemA13 2 years ago
not gonna lie when you said you didnt have the voice but you had the lyrics i thought it would be whack... but i checked it out and its pretty your flow is on lock goes great with the beat and the lyrics are pretty good already but will get better in time
only thing for you voice is sometimes you over anunciate words put a lil more slang and "street" sound if you can but other than that its good shit
"i aint tryna bring you down cause your already on the floor" ... dope
BankRow 3 years ago
thanks for the comment man, and yeah true i should do that but i dont talk like that so then it'll sound like im trying too hard. but thanks again for listening and commenting
ShaheemA13 3 years ago