Relapse Movie Part 1/3

An older video of mine, also my first try at a live action short film. It isn't very good, my newer videos are much better!

http://www.youtube.com/user/ScypaxPictures


~~READ~~ This is the first part of Relapse.

Something is happening deep in a forest in California. A boy named Oliver Green is just your average kid...well, maybe not. Oliver love military things...he even went to a camp for 4 years to learn as much as he could. But he has slowly lost interest in this, and has become lazy.

Oliver did met a person in that camp that was into what he was...his name is Rakin Adams. Rakin was once good friends with Oliver, however, they got in a fight one day and it messed up their friendship...or should I say...Rakin HATES Oliver...and Rakin never forgets such things.

So now, Rakin, who seems to have slight mental problems, is on his way to kill Oliver. What will happen?

Based on a idea by John Lucewich.

Directed, Produced, Edited, and music by John Lucewich

Camera man: James Goodman/John Lucewich

Starring: James Goodman as Oliver Green

and

John Lucewich as Rakin Adams.

Story by John Lucewich and James Goodman

Scypax Pictures Rating: PG-13 for some violence, and suggestive topics. It is strongly suggested that you watch with a adult if you are below 14.

Filmed on a Sony Cybershot compact camera.

THIS WAS MY FIRST TRY MAKING A ~MOVIE~! SO I HOPE YOU ENJOY.

Film Crew:
James Goodman
John Lucewich

Yep, it was a two man crew. lol.

YES, I did get permission from James to use his last name. He knew this was going on YouTube, and he said "That's fine".

THIS MOVIE IS 100% SCIENCE FICTION. The events, characters, and theory in this movie are NOT real, and were written out just for your entertainment. Thank you.

If you have any questions about the movie, then just mail me!

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[shmikee11996]

Idk if you know me, but I'm from your LAC 2 class :)

CR_M_Pronda :)

BTW, nice video :)

[ScypaxPictures]

You seem familiar, and thank you. :)

[SophieSeduction]

wow this is pretty good

you should so take this up at college dude

[ScypaxPictures]

Aw, thanks. ^^

Happy you enjoyed it! =)

[lusasmproductions]

great one!

[moo04240]

boring boring nice keyboard only

[poggyproductions]

wicked awesome bro

[maliciousxpropaganda]

his thoughts and feelings, not just through movement? We want to know and feel how he thinks. However, I can understand if you don't want to project your character's full perspective on the audience. Just a suggestion.

Anyway, sorry if I stated the same things again. I'm kind of multi-tasking and quite off track here. xD

[maliciousxpropaganda]

more fun for the audience to think the other possbilities that are extended from that one scene. Even though the broad generalization is narrow, we understand more so some of the viewers may not just get lost on the way. You want to keep it on a ground level of curiousity and predicitability.

Anyways, I find you idea of creating this film to be quite interesting. Though can I still say that the character should also interact with the audience more, by letting the audience know more about +

[maliciousxpropaganda]

they sound like their breathing or how they walk through the scene, do they saunter or stomp? It gives the characters, well, more character.

I also understand you want a diversity in how you film your movie. However, I still feel like things rushed too much. You should have had the two characters speak to each other, instead of having one recklessly assault the other. It'll give us more things to think about and wonder about the outcomes and reasoning with a few more facts. After all, it's +