The Audacity
verse 1:
raising crunching cinnamon, hoodrat infested linen then
be touching on your written wind like never eaten chicken wing
crazier than Gia Ding, jungles swarm with many men
fight them off in pressure, when my blood be spurting, end it then
face it when your head be spun, were closer than where we started from
chomping on your chewing gum, its truly true, we truly won
they truly fled, they truly run, we on the top, they truly done
its over now suffice to say, its free for us they had to pay
analyze and calculate the lives we had to alternate
hold your breath and concentrate, six more seconds youll have to wait
till verse is done and lines is finished
we always here, its hard to miss us
verse 2:
ok, so recently Ive been getting cranky, getting anxious
waiting to get signed is like waiting to get thanks, its
not likely theyll appreciate the greatness of this apex
should have been cashing paychecks, instead Im on the waitlist
go bonkers at bonanza, Castroslama, ask Fidels grandma
goddamn right I said it, hit her ass longer than Country Grammar
so since I had Audacity I rapidly jacked this Dre track
probably saved for Lamont but surely there is no way that
Ima hold back the gift, Ill take the curse, catch my drift
the challenge is, there is only one with this style, is
anybody listening, switch my flow, Im sizzling
Hot without the Sauce with drops but wont be drizzling
zany like Ken Kaniff, changed my name gotta split,
gotta get far away before I lose consciousness
I consciously impart these parts of my philosophy
which hasnt been established yet but soon will be a pharmacy
where each page is filled with prescription for daily ills
the wisdom is gratis, no retailer of any pills
verse 3:
play it in your stereo, from here to Ontario
in Canada, we rammin ya, with tracks we be plannin ta
scam the industry, show the world where our feelings be
trapped inside the prism of pain, he be fearing we
gained control of misery, classic like the wallabe
so children seem to follow me, lead the father of rap but not astrology
mislead with false pathology, Christian Scientology
experiments with rocks of the earth to form geology
not far from plain topography, mapped with steep stenography
we scientist of hip hop and life so take the call for me
person at the end of the line, you hold the bar for me
as I dismiss stereotypes and make them fall for me
its hard for me to wannabe a pawn of this economy
are u serious listen 2 my style johnny brooklyn same beat i destroyed it
JohnnyBrooklynNYC 2 years ago
yo, if you destroyed it, no need to post it as a response. this was a concept vid for me, strictly for fast flow. the second verse is the only one that makes much sense. if you check my page you will see doper shit. peace
thebert23 2 years ago
Real talk ya'll ok. The first verse was good delivery and maybe good words but your dub is stronger than you original verse so I can't really hear the first part of your verse.
The Second verse .....horrible delivery sounds like you reading right from the paper.
Your third verse needs to be dumbbed down severly.. but it has a lot of potential don't pay attention to these Souljah Boy lovers yo they wouldn't know real hip hop if they slept with Jay Z. Keep doin your thing
jadakiss88 2 years ago
this song wasn't recorded with proper equipment. it has been re recorded since then. but yeah, i agree it could be better. wrote it a while back (besides the second verse which you happened no to like).
thebert23 2 years ago