Uploaded by slk13rik on Jul 24, 2008
AN: I'm am really board so I'm uploading another episode. But I'm going to try and not upload anymore but with how board I am I could upload the rest of this series. That is how board I am.. But if someone wants to come talk to me in my stream I'll be there. We can talk about what ever. I really don't cear right now. I am so board.
4 LEFT!!!!!!!!!!
*Just then the ER doctor comes over to them.*
Nick: How is she?
Doctor: Not good I'm afraid.
Nick: What's wrong?
Doctor: She lost the baby, for starters....The bullet hit her directly
in the stomach, and it killed the baby instantly.
Nick: Oh...
Doctor: She's in a coma....She's still functioning, and in a sense,
she's awake, but...
Kevin: But in a never-ending dream....
Doctor: Sort of....I'm very sorry...we're willing to keep her hooked
up to the life machine as long as you are willing to come visit her.
Nick: We are...
Doctor: Ok...She's back in her room again.
Nick: Thanks.
Doctor: No problem.
*The doctor walks off*
Nick; Why does this always happen to me and her. Either I'm in a stupid coma or she is. I never see her. It's like we spend more time in a dam coma then we do together.. It's not fair and it's not right.
*Nick started to cry*
Kevin: I don't know Nick but God has a plan for all of us and this is part of his plan for her and you.
*Nick stopped crying.*
Nick; I'm going to go see her.
Kevin; Okay Nick.
*Nick takes Denise and they walk to her room.*
*They enter and then nick grabs a chair and sits down next her.*
Nick: Hey Shelbee. Guess whose here? It's Denise. *He could already feel the tears staining his cheeks.* You didn't give up on me so now I'm not going to give up on you. You can pull through this.
Nick: *starting to cry again,* Yeah, Shel's, Denise wanted to come see
you...So did I.....We found Joe....Everyone else is outside
still.....We wanted to come check on you though.....
*He shifted Denise to his other arm, and she squealed, and then, said,*
Denise: Mommy....
Nick: What?! Joe, get away from the door!
Denise: Mommy....
Nick: Oh....Shelbee! Denise just...*He had forgotten for a moment that
she was in a coma, and then, sank back down into his chair, crying.
Denise soon started to cry too, but Nick paid no attention.*
*A couple of minutes Later Joe came in.*
Joe: Hey Nick are you guy's okay?
*Nick looked up at Joe.*
Nick: Joe dose it really look like I'm ok?
Joe: No not really. But why is Denise crying?
Nick: I don't know.......She's probably hungry.....
Joe: Nick, what happened?
Nick: What do you *sniff* mean?
Joe: Nick, I think I can tell when you're not OK....
Nick: Denise....Denise said her first word......And it was mommy....
Joe: Nick....I know it hurts not having Shel's here to share that with
you.....But, She'll be back with you soon enough, OK?
Nick: *nods.*
Joe: Do you want me to go feed Denise?
Nick: If you're offering, then yes.
Joe: Ok. *He picks up Denise, and walks out of the room with her.*
Nick: Shelbee please wake up. I need you right now.
*Then the door came open again and Paul and Denise came in.*
Denise: Nick are you okay?
Nick: No not really.
Paul: Nick we know it's hard but you'll get through it.
Nick: I really don't know how.
Denise: It'll be OK Nick....It'll all be fine.....*She gives him a big
hug.* We have to leave...We have to take Frankie home....We'll call
later......
Nick: Okay see ya then.
Paul: Denise you go ahead. I need tot talk to nick.
Denise: Okay.
*She leaves.*
Paul: Nick I don't mean to bring this up, but we have a tour coming up in about a month so you won't be able to be here all the time.
What will Nick say? Will he go back no tour with his brothers? Will Shel's ever wake up? Or will she die?
AN: Okay Me and Don need to seriously need to think up something better than comas all the time. All well it works right now.
Peace Love Jonas
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i hate that you made her first word mommy when it was only nick and shelbee was not there to share it with him. it's just rely sad i can piture how horrible he feels.
I only know that cuz my aunt had to go trough all that cuz my uncle was in a coma and his baby's first word was daddy and my aunt was so happy but upset at the same time. well i hope shelbee's alright!!!!
peace.♥. JONAS
♥AlieN.
ShortyLikeMine53 3 years ago
MORRRRRRE!
xojonastwilightox 3 years ago
aaaaaaargh!!! need more!
Guppis1 3 years ago
wow omj wow
nickjonasgirlbrebrey 3 years ago
EEEKKKK!! more
okcsooners 3 years ago
omg i was crying why do they have a tour next next next oneee plz ur storys r the boam plzz i make me cry all the time :)))
gabby1296 3 years ago
haha, well your doing an awesome job!
coma's are cool, and they make awesome stories!
acoustichearts94 3 years ago
i agree with you and in the video i was there to like 2nd row and i saw nick wipe away his tear ifelt so bad i was like Nick no don't cry so of course i started to cry
jonasbrothersluvur1 3 years ago
OMJ i'm like crying right now keep posting please btw can you come check out my story please
JonasDemiLove 3 years ago
i swear your stories just get better and better
ilovenickyjonas 3 years ago