Re: Let's Write a Sawng (Step 10: Bridge Lyrics)

I kinda messed with the rhythm and added more syllables. Hope ya'll like it.

I don't wanna cause no harm
I don't wanna make a scene
Io don't wanna be a cause for alarm
I just wanna be
So let the music PLAAAAAAAAAY!!!!

Or, to go with bg8282's suggestion

I don't wanna cause no harm
I don't wanna make a scene
I don't wanna be a cause for alarm
I just wanna BEEEEEEEE

(I apologize for that last note. Yuck.)

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[ChrisTucker05]

I think the bleedorange chorus chords at the end idea is good. This song is a tad repetitive and that would be a good way to break up the monotony.

[bg8282]

actually, take out the "just" of "So just let my music BEEEEEEE!!!", for timing's sake

I don't wanna cause no harm

I don't wanna make a scene

I don't wanna be a cause for alarm

So let my music BEEEEEEE!!

[bg8282]

I really like it

But what if you made the chorus 4 lines instead of 5 (the instrumental could easily be shortened up), and sang "I just wanna be" like you sing the last line, "So let the music PLAAAAAAAAAY!!!"

But change it to "Just let my music be"

So you have four lines of:

I don't wanna cause no harm

I don't wanna make a scene

I don't wanna be a cause for alarm

So just let my music BEEEEEEE!!!

that's just my two cents, i like where you have taken it tho.

[danciswithwolves]

I likes it.... definitely good call with the extra syllable... livens up the bridge nicely

[leyakim]

I think adding the extra syllable is a good idea... for some reason it definitely sounds more "weezer" keep up the good work

[DavidDayson]

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