Temptation - A poem based on Twilight
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Very nice Elena... one suggestion... transition your images at the time your lines move in. It's a real distraction from the words when the reader's reading and as he/she is reading the background image changes. ~Tilden
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elena--chaann this is sooo great i keep blushing..:)
28rizsha 2 years ago
Aww thanks so much! :) I'm pleased it touches you so. :)
Take care!
-Elena <33
PoemsOfTheSoul 2 years ago
Woow You Are Good! I Wish I Could Be A Writer Like You. Oh Well I Hope That Dream Come's True Someday :)
I Gave 5 Stars.. Love Your Poems Btw.
:] :] :]
koolkatmar25 2 years ago
Thanks for rating! I'm sure you can be a writer like me, and probably better. All you have to do is write from your heart with sincerity, and no-one will be able to compare :)
Take care.
-Elena <33
PoemsOfTheSoul 2 years ago
Thanks Elena. And Yea I Hope To Be Like You Maybe When I Get In High School I Can Write About You, In The School New's Paper Saying "How You Inspired Me" Then Tell Other's About You, So They Be Sure To View Your Amazing Vids!
koolkatmar25 2 years ago
That would be simply amazing :)
I have a huge ambition of just leaving something memorable behind, and inspiring people is I think one of the most beautiful ways of being remembered. I am honoured that you feel inspired by me, please let me know if you've written something; I would love to hear :)
Take care
-Elena <33
PoemsOfTheSoul 2 years ago