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Temptation - A poem based on Twilight

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Uploaded by on Jan 16, 2010

I wrote a poem based on Stephenie Meyer's Twilight Saga, after my friend requested :) It has some cute pictures too!

It's based on the relationship between Edward and Bella close to the beginning of the books, but it can be applied to real relationships, when somebody doesnt want to admit their true feelings.

I hope you like it :)

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(The piece is 'Black keys' by Chopin.)

-Elena

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  • elena--chaann this is sooo great i keep blushing..:)

  • Aww thanks so much! :) I'm pleased it touches you so. :)

    Take care!

    -Elena <33

  • Woow You Are Good! I Wish I Could Be A Writer Like You. Oh Well I Hope That Dream Come's True Someday :)

    I Gave 5 Stars.. Love Your Poems Btw.

    :] :] :]

  • Thanks for rating! I'm sure you can be a writer like me, and probably better. All you have to do is write from your heart with sincerity, and no-one will be able to compare :)

    Take care.

    -Elena <33

  • Thanks Elena. And Yea I Hope To Be Like You Maybe When I Get In High School I Can Write About You, In The School New's Paper Saying "How You Inspired Me" Then Tell Other's About You, So They Be Sure To View Your Amazing Vids!

  • That would be simply amazing :)

    I have a huge ambition of just leaving something memorable behind, and inspiring people is I think one of the most beautiful ways of being remembered. I am honoured that you feel inspired by me, please let me know if you've written something; I would love to hear :)

    Take care

    -Elena <33

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  • Very nice Elena... one suggestion... transition your images at the time your lines move in. It's a real distraction from the words when the reader's reading and as he/she is reading the background image changes. ~Tilden

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