tonight (original) by mark

Constructive criticism welcome.

I've had a few people asking here and there to hear some of our own stuff other than the covers we do, so here's a lil something I wrote down today. I've never thought of myself as a vocalist, I'm just purely doing this 'cause I've asked to and I love writing!

It's not perfect but I hope you like. The song is called "tonight" and here are the lyrics;

tonight,
she said.

as the waves crash down and drown my tears
the spiders on my window catch all my fears.

tonight,
she said.

a million hearts will break tonight
but none will scream or cry like mine.

don't
leave
me now.

down down drown your car crash heart
there's honey in this summer it's who you are
tequila nights and city lights
take you away.
down down drown your car crash heart
there's honey in this summer it's who you are
don't stay away.

I'm waving now to the tail lights
as she drives off into the sky

tonight,
she said.

as we laugh and cry about all those times
all the memories, all the signs.

tonight,
we said.

don't
leave
me now.

down down drown your car crash heart
there's honey in this summer it's who you are
tequila nights and city lights
take you away.
down down drown your car crash heart
there's honey in this summer it's who you are
don't stay away.



Inspiration: Kids In Glass Houses & Every Avenue (if anyone was wondering)

Category:

Music

Tags:

• tonight
• guitar
• Acoustic
• Pop
• Rock
• Alternative
• Unsigned
• mark
• plummer

[dmeagle1]

good job man, you have a lot of talent

[thomasstreubel]

if any big record studio discovered you, you could be a big star dude (:

[Eclipse0709]

I couldn't hear you. :/

Can you sing louder please?

Get a better mic or something?

[sydneypied]

hey mark when ya bringing on some updated stuff :)

[Atticus226]

that's good....very good job =)

your guitar looks cool...

[schiggy182]

great lyrics dood. nice work.

[wildboyz321]

wow this is really good.

beautiful lyrics, awesome guitar work

well done man.