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Uploaded by on Apr 20, 2009

I looked at Joe, 'Jack will be here soon'

Joe wrapped an arm firm around my waist, 'Okay.'

Minutes past and someone walked over with a freaky clown mask; I hid my face in Joes arm. I felt the eyes of the person on me, then the person started to talk, 'Dont be afraid...'

My head snapped up at the person, 'No...it cant be'

The person nodded their head, 'But it is.'

Joe looked down at me, Baby...'

I breathed heavy and I screamed, 'I THOUGHT YOU LEFT!'

The person chuckled, 'I couldnt leave my Belly in Jacksonville, now could I?'

I shook my head vigorously, 'NO! You cant be the one! You just cant!'

Joe looked down at me; he was concerned about my sudden mood swing, but knew it was because of this person.

The person asked, 'Shall I remove my mask and show your little boy toy over there, who I am?'

I looked down and a tear fell, 'I cant believe my cousin, the person who was there for me did this to me...'

Joe eyes flashed from me to the person and back to me, 'Baby, its not is it?'

I looked up at him and nodded, 'It is.'

The person pulled of their mask, 'Hello Joseph.'

Joe pulled me behind him, 'Stay away from her!'

The person chuckled, 'Protective today?'

Joe glared, 'Why on earth would you do this to your own cousin!'

The person grinned, 'Revenge is sweet, isnt it?'

Joe yelled, 'NO!'

The person laughed, 'We all know youve missed me, just admit it.'

I stepped in front of Joe, 'Back off and go back to Phoenix Grace!!!!'

Grace Wilson, shes Jack?! This cant be right, my cousin being the person whos harassing me?! It sort makes sense if I remember what happened one year ago, but Joe didnt like her anymore, he started to fall in love with me; and I dont blame him.

Okay, now this really does make sense, she was so rude to me at Christmas and she was always asking me if I knew who Jack was. She had this envy kind of hate towards me, its like I was too pretty, my hair was too shiny, my skin was too tan, or my personality was too bubbly; its like I was the bad person in all of this. When I was the one being blackmailed, she used to be my best friend.

I snapped out of my little trance and looked at Grace she was pulling something out of her bag, she spoke in a calm tone, 'So, shall we do this the easy or the hard way?'

I stared at her in shock, 'No, you arent...'

Grace pulled a gun out of her bag and aimed it at Joe, 'Shall he go first?'

Joe held my hand, I screamed, 'Dont do this Grace!!'

Grace moved the gun and aimed it at me, towards my heart, 'Then youll go first.'

Joe yelled, 'Keep the gun on me and kill me, not her!'

Grace pointed the gun back at Joe and smirked, 'I always win Mirabelle, and never forget that.' She pulled the trigger and shot Joe twice. As Joe fell his hand slipped away from my hand slowly and I lost the one I loved the most in this world.

I screamed and started crying really hard, 'J-oey! No baby, no...you cant leave me!'

Grace aimed the gun back at me, 'Bye Mirabelle Ill miss you.' She pulled the trigger and shot me in the heart, I fell helplessly across Joes chest, dying with my love; knowing well be together on the other side.

My alarm buzzed and squealed and I woke up, the dream, it happened again, sometimes I feel like it might actually happenbut then again, I dont have a cousin named Grace Wilson.

**let me know what you thought about this one shot/school project!!!

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  • loved it!!!

    the teacher will luv it

  • acutally;

    i got like a B+ on it.

    she wasn't so fond of it...

  • awee

    to bad

    i loved it though

    i wonder y she didnt like it??

  • she's a picking grader.

    all the letters from jack had to be in italics and i didn't do that...

    and there was more to it.

  • ok this was amazing!

    so i was crying hysterically when joe got shot, and then mirabelle got shot i was sobbing and then it said it was all a dream and 'i dont have a cousin named grace wilson' and i started laughing so hard! and then my sister came in and asked if i was PMSing or what!

    definetly a new favorite!

    also- r you going to continue mercy or when your wasted because i love those stories!

    x3

  • haha;

    thanks.

    idk if i'll finish mercy;

    but i'm trying to find time to write When You're Wasted

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  • ok how could you only get a B+ on that, italics or not!?

    x3

  • I loved that!!!! Omg!!!!!! I was like flipping out when they were shot,and then when she woke up I was like "WOAH THAT WAS A FREAKING DREAM?!?!?!?!"

  • i was gonna say

    her cousin is fucking insabe.

    good thing it was just a dream.

    awesome project!

  • oh my fucking god bre!

    that was awesome!

    it was a dream?

    well it was amazing!

    i loved it!!

  • holy shit! :O

    dude that was awesome! i was like freaking out! i kept thinking no way this is like romeo and juliet or something! then it was dream hahahaha.

    i love this, completely amazing, incredible, awesome ha i don't know lol.

  • omg! i was crying sooo hard wen she shot joe, then when mirabelle got shot i was crying hysterically. then i read the last part and i laughed at myself for being such a retard!

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